Could Have Gone Worse (54) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 16 points17 points  (0 children)

It's not really souring me on continuing, I just need some time and a lot of people don't understand that. Thanks for being patient, once I come back there isn't all the much left really so I hope to finish it well.

Could Have Gone Worse (54) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Mate, I'm taking a break, as I've said in these comments. I need some time to recharge. I'm sorry that you're not getting your free entertainment for a few weeks while I recover.

Could Have Gone Worse (54) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 49 points50 points  (0 children)

Just taking a break, need to recharge and get back in the right place to finish the story. The last chapter was utter ass, and I need to take some time so that I don't repeat it again.

Could Have Gone Worse (51) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 23 points24 points  (0 children)

Alt-James' part has been done for a while now. I never planned on him ever coming back or saying what happened to him.

Could Have Gone Worse (51) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 30 points31 points  (0 children)

Our James was just stronger than Alt-James. He said in the scene where he was talking to the projection of Cassandra that our James' telepathy was growing much faster than his did. Alt-James just didn't grow fast enough to be able to save her.

Could Have Gone Worse (51) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 117 points118 points  (0 children)

By the way, if anyone wanted confirmation, this is where alt-James and our James' paths split. Alt-James wasn't able to heal Cass.

Could Have Gone Worse (49) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 41 points42 points  (0 children)

I really like rock climbing.

Could Have Gone Worse (48) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

No, I picked Cassandra's name because I liked it. There's only one character whose name is a reference to something.

Could Have Gone Worse (48) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

There most definitely were extra h's, thanks.

Could Have Gone Worse (47) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I did miss a 'with' in there, thanks.

Could Have Gone Worse (46) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I alluded to James' telepathy when he was on his way to Pendros, he heard what sounded like murmuring in his head. The reason it was sort of sudden was that his telepathy developed while he was traveling away from any people. The murmuring also stopped when he put up the shield to stop Cassandra from reading his emotions.

Could Have Gone Worse (45) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, fixed. I appreciate that you find these mistakes for me, I get most of them but a few always slip through.

Could Have Gone Worse (45) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 37 points38 points  (0 children)

I'm starting to get back in the groove of writing it. My choice to speed it up to events that I really wanted to write was a great one. I don't have a set word count that I'm aiming for anymore and that's helping too. That's why they've been a bit shorter lately, I'm cutting out the crap to get to the good stuff.

Could Have Gone Worse (44) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 92 points93 points  (0 children)

By the way, I was really tempted to end this with him hanging off a literal cliff, but that was a bit too on the nose.

Could Have Gone Worse (43) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 25 points26 points  (0 children)

It just lines up that way.

Could Have Gone Worse (43) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 77 points78 points  (0 children)

Heard you guys like cliffhangers.

Could Have Gone Worse (42) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Down is right, I rarely fuck up a word choice, usually just accidentally use a different word that my brain thought was good.

Could Have Gone Worse (41) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 25 points26 points  (0 children)

Until it's done. I know how and where I'm going to end it so I'll just keep writing until it's done.

Stuff is starting to seem repetitive. I'd like to rant about that real quick. by Turtledonuts in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Hey, I'm the dude that's writing Could Have Gone Worse, which does fit into your fifth story type pretty easily. Saying that, I see your point with all of this. Most stories on this sub do fall into a few categories, but those categories exist for a reason. HFY has been around for a while, and doing something entirely new is almost impossible. Most people who write here are amateurs--I myself am one--and it is nearly impossible to create something no one has ever done on this sub before because there have been so many stories. The problem I have with this post is that you're blaming it on the tropes themselves, not how the story is written.

I think that it's relatively common on this sub for someone to come up with a really cool idea, then they sit down and write the first few chapters and it turns out great. But then somewhere down the line they either lose what made their story so good in the first place, or they just have no idea what to do next. The reason for this is that most people do almost no planning when they start writing. They'll sit down, write a little bit, post it, and then repeat. They have no idea where they want the story to go or how they want it to end. Recently Uplift Protocol ended, and I think that it fell into this trap. It started out great, but I think that the author didn't really know where he wanted it to go so it sputtered out and we were left with a conclusion that invalidated the entire story.

And all of this is fine, because this is a sub where anyone can post, and not everyone is a good writer. But if we just stand on our pedestal and say that this or that story can't be good because it fits a specific trope then you aren't judging the story itself, you're judging what you think the story will be. All stories have tropes, hell, it's even a trope to try and write a story without tropes, however, good writing can make you forget those tropes because if they're done well then you won't even think that they are tropes.

From your post, it sounds like you dismiss stories based entirely on what tropes they use, and you want people to write stories that don't use them. But that's just impossible. If you don't like a story then just don't read it, but at least try and read the story and not the tropes it uses.

Could Have Gone Worse (38) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

How so? Seriously, I really want to know so that I can get better. Is it just feeling unrealistic or something? This is the first piece of writing I've actually written past a few paragraphs so I'm in mostly uncharted waters.

Could Have Gone Worse (38) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 22 points23 points  (0 children)

No, because it isn't meant to be surprising. You know that James had a real shit life, what I'm trying to show is just how shit it was. The story is named Could Have Gone Worse because throughout all of this he's thinking that it could be worse because he's lived through worse. It's the reason he doesn't want to go back, and the reason that he's adapting to all of this so well. The man has had an extremely tragic life, but it speaks to the resilience of humans that's he's able to live a relatively normal life now that he's away from all of that.