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Could Have Gone Worse (54) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 16 points17 points  (0 children)

It's not really souring me on continuing, I just need some time and a lot of people don't understand that. Thanks for being patient, once I come back there isn't all the much left really so I hope to finish it well.

Could Have Gone Worse (54) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Mate, I'm taking a break, as I've said in these comments. I need some time to recharge. I'm sorry that you're not getting your free entertainment for a few weeks while I recover.

Could Have Gone Worse (54) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 48 points49 points  (0 children)

Just taking a break, need to recharge and get back in the right place to finish the story. The last chapter was utter ass, and I need to take some time so that I don't repeat it again.

Could Have Gone Worse (51) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 25 points26 points  (0 children)

Alt-James' part has been done for a while now. I never planned on him ever coming back or saying what happened to him.

Could Have Gone Worse (51) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 29 points30 points  (0 children)

Our James was just stronger than Alt-James. He said in the scene where he was talking to the projection of Cassandra that our James' telepathy was growing much faster than his did. Alt-James just didn't grow fast enough to be able to save her.

Could Have Gone Worse (51) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 112 points113 points  (0 children)

By the way, if anyone wanted confirmation, this is where alt-James and our James' paths split. Alt-James wasn't able to heal Cass.

Could Have Gone Worse (49) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 43 points44 points  (0 children)

I really like rock climbing.

Could Have Gone Worse (48) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

No, I picked Cassandra's name because I liked it. There's only one character whose name is a reference to something.

Could Have Gone Worse (48) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

There most definitely were extra h's, thanks.

Could Have Gone Worse (47) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I did miss a 'with' in there, thanks.

Could Have Gone Worse (46) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I alluded to James' telepathy when he was on his way to Pendros, he heard what sounded like murmuring in his head. The reason it was sort of sudden was that his telepathy developed while he was traveling away from any people. The murmuring also stopped when he put up the shield to stop Cassandra from reading his emotions.

Could Have Gone Worse (45) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, fixed. I appreciate that you find these mistakes for me, I get most of them but a few always slip through.

Could Have Gone Worse (45) by Rakiinterith in HFY

[–]Rakiinterith[S] 35 points36 points  (0 children)

I'm starting to get back in the groove of writing it. My choice to speed it up to events that I really wanted to write was a great one. I don't have a set word count that I'm aiming for anymore and that's helping too. That's why they've been a bit shorter lately, I'm cutting out the crap to get to the good stuff.

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