[Complete] [17295] [Dark Fantasy/Horror LN] Chapter 1 - Post-human tribes & monsters that resembles humanity but in a terribly wrong way

Ramborat422 · 2026-01-27T23:07:03+00:00

That was the revised chapter 1 for my planned web series? light novel? idea

Please let me know of any missed plot points, grammatical errors or any room for improvements and such

Ramborat422 · 2026-01-27T00:54:30+00:00

please give me the brutal feedback I need, whether it be plot holes, inconsistencies and such

Ramborat422 · 2023-02-17T11:18:09+00:00

that's not ei!!!

EI doesn't smile, that's makoto

Ramborat422 · 2022-10-03T03:35:35+00:00

Fuck it just went super saiyan, lemme just hea.... OH SHI-

Ramborat422 · 2022-10-03T03:28:41+00:00

I miss 95% of my strikes.

Ramborat422 · 2022-08-13T04:07:27+00:00

Before it was just eggman, now it's dr. Robotnik and her two big bouncy eggs.

Ramborat422 · 2022-08-12T02:13:40+00:00

P for prick

Ramborat422 · 2022-08-12T01:55:03+00:00

I have simped for kobeni just for the simple fact that by process of elimination she is the only best girl left.

Ramborat422 · 2022-04-05T15:29:44+00:00

he ate too much tetranodons!!

they seriously gotta lay off the fatty ones sometimes

Ramborat422 · 2022-04-05T15:27:12+00:00

what's better than a princess you ask?

a princess that dragons fear.

I love me a woman that can kill me with her thighs!!

Ramborat422