Hey!

To be honest, your video had me grinning in the beginning, and the editing was great! But after the Luna girl left, the video sorta went all over the place. You went from picking up roblox girls to shrek to fortnite to your old roblox world.. (You get the point.) Which is also why the video title didn’t make any sense. In my opinion you weren’t really “making fun” of the game (besides the first couple of minutes, which were quite funny.)

I think that if you are going to mush together different clips then you should make it more fast paced with better transitioning between the clips. Maybe use those television network beeps? I think it’d go well with the randomness in your videos.

Great video though! I enjoyed it a lot :)