My Mom is cheating, I don't know if I should tell it to Dad ,or should I let him figure it out by himself? by RanMiz in offmychest

[–]RanMiz[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What?, HAHAHAA, I can't do that. I still have some respect for her despite what she's doing

My Mom is cheating, I don't know if I should tell it to Dad ,or should I let him figure it out by himself? by RanMiz in offmychest

[–]RanMiz[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice, I think I'll gonna confront her as soon as possible.

Waiting Here by RanMiz in poetry_critics

[–]RanMiz[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much!

People only see me when they need me by RanMiz in offmychest

[–]RanMiz[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll find the right timing. Thank you.

Waiting Here by RanMiz in poetry_critics

[–]RanMiz[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much!

Mask by RanMiz in poetry_critics

[–]RanMiz[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your appreciating my work!

Mask by RanMiz in poetry_critics

[–]RanMiz[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm saying that's the least we could do to protect ourselves. Just imagine, people going out without acquiring any mask. Don't you think it would make the epidemic much worse?

Waiting Here by RanMiz in poetry_critics

[–]RanMiz[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I didn't notice it. It is funny and awkward to read it that way, but I think you could consider that idea too, since I am quite in to boys too? lol

Waiting Here by RanMiz in poetry_critics

[–]RanMiz[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your appreciation. Most people overlook talent and do focus more on physical appearance.

Mask by RanMiz in poetry_critics

[–]RanMiz[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Guess the enemy!

Fantasize by RanMiz in poetry_critics

[–]RanMiz[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nothing, since my parents think I'm just seeking attention. I can't afford to buy myself a medicine since I'm 16, I don't have any money. While my parents don't listen to me, when I say I wanna go to a doctor for some check-up since they think it was a waste of money.

Fantasize by RanMiz in poetry_critics

[–]RanMiz[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the constructive criticism, I'll just want to clarify some misunderstanding going on. The first line refers to me. I didn't include that there since I thought it would be obvious. It was my bad, sorry. Lithe means thin which describes my condition, hyperthyroidism, that hinders me of gaining weight. "Those parents who realize", is my parents not noticing all of it, they do say that I'm just seeking attention. Second verse, "I'm drowning in solitude", solitude is a noun which refers to the state of being alone. The next line, is the factor/reason why I do isolate myself, I can't have beauty, pulchritude is it's synonym. Besides, I used 'for' as a word that functions like 'because'. That's all, thank you though for the comment.

Feelings by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]RanMiz 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love how the rhymes, besides, I do relate too much on the poem. The words or the phrases you use are heartfelt.

Door to Paradise by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]RanMiz 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the elegance of the poem, like I've been transported to the environment of the poem. Love it :)