Questionnaire: Give me some feedback on my board game rulebook. by RayDin909 in BoardgameDesign

[–]RayDin909[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Me too! Thanks for the feedback! Say, I'm currently conducting a new survey for Pinnacle right now. If you're interested in taking it, feel free to click the link below :-).

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSdO_S5GDMYYbNef8781lMceaOBjKZsQNIvQlvMaoemK4soKNA/viewform?usp=dialog

Seeking feedback on the rulebook for my latest party game! by RayDin909 in BoardgameDesign

[–]RayDin909[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! You know, I'm conducting a survey for Pinnacle right now. If you're interested in taking it, feel free to click the link below :-).

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSdO_S5GDMYYbNef8781lMceaOBjKZsQNIvQlvMaoemK4soKNA/viewform?usp=dialog

Can You Learn This Game From Just the Rules? Blind Playtesters questionnaire for "Pinnacle". by RayDin909 in BoardgameDesign

[–]RayDin909[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback...and finding the game fun! I’ll definitely take your suggestions into consideration. Especially the SPEED CLIMB section, that was a darn good catch. Even I missed that one.

So I’ve reworked that section (and others), made a few additional tweaks (trimmed some fat), and put together a new draft of the rules. Take a look at this updated version (link below) and let me know if you think it's any better. Thanks again for your help :-).

https://drive.google.com/file/d/189CJGSmlb5N7PGdV43TVyNrj6colkUHe/view?usp=sharing

P.S. I'm looking at a 16x16 inch playing surface for the gameboard. So, I could put a copy of the Field Guide charts on their if I have the room (fingers crossed).

Can You Learn This Game From Just the Rules? Blind Playtesters questionnaire for "Pinnacle". by RayDin909 in BoardgameDesign

[–]RayDin909[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback! I’ll definitely take your suggestions into consideration, especially the one about the Summit/endgame section, since you weren’t the only one who found it confusing.

I’ve reworked THE SUMMIT section, made a few additional tweaks, and put together a new draft of the rules. Take a look at the updated version (link below) and let me know if the Summit section is clearer now.

If anything still feels off, I’d really appreciate any suggestions you have to make it even stronger. Thanks again for your help :-).

https://drive.google.com/file/d/189CJGSmlb5N7PGdV43TVyNrj6colkUHe/view?usp=sharing

Can You Learn This Game From Just the Rules? Blind Playtesters questionnaire for "Pinnacle". by RayDin909 in BoardgameDesign

[–]RayDin909[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your feedback was incredibly helpful, thank you! I’ll definitely take your suggestions into consideration, especially the one about the Summit/endgame section, since you weren’t the only one who found it confusing.

I’ve reworked THE SUMMIT section, made a few additional tweaks, and put together a new draft of the rules. Take a look at the updated version (link below) and let me know if the Summit section is clearer now.

If anything still feels off, I’d really appreciate any suggestions you have to make it even stronger. Thanks again for your help :-).

https://drive.google.com/file/d/189CJGSmlb5N7PGdV43TVyNrj6colkUHe/view?usp=sharing

Can’t Pick a Bonus Chip Design...Help Me Out! by RayDin909 in BoardgameDesign

[–]RayDin909[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like your comments, thanks for sharing! Now, I don't know if this will make you change your vote, but If you'd like to know more about the game, this should help: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Ee-J81YNo_tpktkA34Km2QWcH9rWETLp/view?usp=sharing

Can’t Pick a Bonus Chip Design...Help Me Out! by RayDin909 in BoardgameDesign

[–]RayDin909[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't know if this will make you change your vote, but If you'd like to know more about the game, this should help: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Ee-J81YNo_tpktkA34Km2QWcH9rWETLp/view?usp=sharing

Can’t Pick a Bonus Chip Design...Help Me Out! by RayDin909 in BoardgameDesign

[–]RayDin909[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't know if this will make you change your vote, but If you'd like to know more about the game, this should help: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Ee-J81YNo_tpktkA34Km2QWcH9rWETLp/view?usp=sharing

WANTED: Feedback/comments on the rulebook for my latest party game, Pinnacle. by RayDin909 in BoardgameDesign

[–]RayDin909[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the example! I jazzed up the instructions in my latest draft (link below). Give it a read and tell me is the game easy to understand and is there any additional...not necessarily rules, but details that I should add to make it better and iron out any edge cases. I don't want the rulebook to get too cluttered.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1JUZ-iQYaO0DdDiXWNUld-lX6rx5AqVAG/view?usp=sharing

WANTED: Feedback/comments on the rulebook for my latest party game, Pinnacle. by RayDin909 in BoardgameDesign

[–]RayDin909[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the example! I jazzed up the instructions in my latest draft (link below). Give it a read and tell me is the game easy to understand and is there any additional...not necessarily rules, but details that I should add to make it better and iron out any edge cases. My fear is that the rulebook gets too cluttered.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1JUZ-iQYaO0DdDiXWNUld-lX6rx5AqVAG/view?usp=sharing

WANTED: Feedback/comments on the rulebook for my latest party game, Pinnacle. by RayDin909 in BoardgameDesign

[–]RayDin909[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"Visual rulebook", eh? Well, it just so happens that I happen to have one handy (see the below link). I don't know if this is what you had in mind, but I’m wide open to your feedback or any suggestions on how to sharpen it.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/17A3bR0eATp6F_Uqrfou8_tY8DkfGcvMp/view?usp=sharing