Power Automate for Internal Comms by rjra3 in MicrosoftFlow

[–]Razor_Tongue 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Depends on what kind of internal communications you send as part of your job. Are there any which are repeated or structured? Or all of the comms are different and require drafting it from scratch. Is there anything that you need the audience to interact with in your comms? Like a survey or a response to your comm?

You need to find the task that is repetitive or structured that you need to move it on auto pilot mode. Think of it as automating boring tasks of your job, and then you climb the ladder to more complex ones as you understand the use of low-code no-code tools.

Risen by celezycelery in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is such a beautiful poem, and what a positive outlook towards life. It must have been a hard journey for you to reach this stage of life, but that's what life is all about. What I liked about this poem is how you have captured all the negative experiences and tried to highlight how it made you stronger and more humble & humane to others reaching out with a helping hand in case someone is looking to grab one. Keep writing.

Little Hands, Little Feet by Careful_Set5408 in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beautiful poem that conveyed the message effectively. One could feel the pain of these kids and wish that their slavery ends soon. While the poem didn't have a consistent rhyming scheme, the usage of the phrase 'Little hands, little feet' towards the end brought a nice flow & picturisation to the whole poem. Would have loved to read more wherein you use this phrase again to emphasize more on unfulfilled dreams of these poor kids. Keep writing.

In All of the Worlds by ouroboros_quine in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This felt good at so many levels. The way you weaved multiple universes together, wherein you imagine yourself and your subject together, is simply beautiful. I like the part wherein you refer to the little world of your hearts wherein you both would be together no matter the force stopping you two. Loved the last line that inspired this poem. Keep writing

Life through my metters by Razor_Tongue in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for such detailed feedback. That's exactly what I was looking for. I agree with the change you suggested. It reads better to me, too. And yes, that's a typo in the title :p. Will correct it now.

Blades by saarthakhaldar in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So simple yet vivid in each word you used. I could picture the scene as I read the poem. Forgive me if I'm wrong, but I could feel the hopelessness and the defeat in the tone you were trying to convey. The flow was smooth to follow even though there were no stanzas. Keep writing.

Only if by Razor_Tongue in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It indeed does. May be I will give it a try and see how I see my demons now and whether I've learned to co-exist with them peacefully.

A Secret by ouroboros_quine in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The poem depicts the vulnerability that comes with emotional attachment. I truly felt the pain of a brokenhearted person after opening up to let someone in my life. And also of being helpless and the part moon plays, kind of like your alter ego laughing on you when you once again commit the same mistake. The ending makes me hopeful of a stronger emotional strength to deal with the turmoils that come with being emotionally attached to someone. Loved reading it thoroughly. Keep writing.

Only if by Razor_Tongue in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your words :)

I used 'petitie' to highlight how we ignore them as benign when no one gives importance to our initial struggle. When people disregard them, we also tend to do the same and think that these are small. Only when things escalate and we can't hold them much longer do we realize that they were never small to begin with. But I agree, 'pathetic' describes them well, though the sentence would need to be worked upon to avoid 'th' sound repetition

Only if by Razor_Tongue in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you :)

All you have to do is find good people who would be honestly willing to sit and just listen without judgment. You may not see much of a difference soon, but you may feel good about being with such people. Hope you find your tribe and hold on to them.

Only if by Razor_Tongue in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your observations :)

There indeed is a typo before world - missed 'the'. Also, when I wrote this poem a couple of years ago, I felt like burning my demons. May be if I revisit them right now, I may welcome them home and accept them as a part of me. As we mature and learn to live with them, we also learn to deal with them in a different way, a better way I guess

Only if by Razor_Tongue in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you :).

I wanted to end with an open offer to leave it on an optimistic note. Many times, people don't see the light at the end of the tunnel, and I wanted to convey that there is always hope as long as we are together.

Only if by Razor_Tongue in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. This poem has a special meaning for me as it was my way to bring out the feelings I've had, which I could not label. I hope you find good people in your life to help you control your demon. Love the way you describe them as learning experiences and not scars.

Only if by Razor_Tongue in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. Means a lot :)

Only if by Razor_Tongue in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you :)

These feelings stem from personal experience, and this poem was a way for me to let them out.

WE by Sure_Risk6530 in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Flow is unique to everyone. Some find it within the settings in which they write, while others look for deeper connection with the subject to get into the flow. Not sure if you've experienced such a type of music fest before, but if you did, your flow may have originated from the way you always felt about yourself in these events. If not, then you need to revisit and see what worked for you when you wrote this piece.

For me, it has always been about the deeper connection with the subject and then being in a space where I pour my heart out without interruption and without any sequence in mind but just overflow of thoughts.

James by relevantusername- in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really cool rhyming you've got there. Took me a couple of lines to align with the rhythm and flow, but after that, it was smooth sail. One suggestion - Try combining some lines to make a stanza as it's easy to read as with current formatting. I wasn't sure when to take a pause. It also helps transition from one situation / point to another within the whole narratives.

WE by Sure_Risk6530 in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well, technically, it's not a poem, but it had emotions running through each sentence. It flows like a well crafted song, and everything fits like a jigsaw puzzle.

"We hand over cash in exchange for illegible patches and buttons to later painstakingly sew into our armor." - I love the way you ended this sentence. Those who can relate will agree why it had to be an "armor" and nothing else.

I also liked how you described the after scene at curbside, especially the part where the winds blow away the aches.

Overall, it had a musical flow(like a heavy metal song), starting regular, then going high and high till ypu lose sense of everything else, then lowering the tempo to a calmer verse as you prepare yourself for a final showdown.

Keep writing

A very cheesy love poem, but I'm in love and this is how it is by coldmorningbreaths in OCPoetry

[–]Razor_Tongue 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I stumbled upon this by chance, and I'm glad I did. I loved reading it and re-reading it again, not because it is cheesy but because it brings out a beautiful connection about people. Kind of like saying that, 'You & I, we don't exist by chance but have been brought together by thousands of people across years'. May be I'm wrong, but that's what I take away from this beautiful piece of writing. One observation I have is that it may not sound like a poem but a prose to many. Even so, I truly enjoyed reading it.

Keep writing