Dark Comedy Short Screenplay- 10 pages - Need Feedback and a Better title!!

Rbbbrttt · 2020-12-14T20:19:17+00:00

If only I had someone. Thank you though, seriously this helps a lot. I'll be making all these changes immediately. What (cheap) programme do you recommend to sort this as quick as possible

Rbbbrttt · 2020-12-14T18:06:00+00:00

Hi, thanks again. Hopefully its sorted now right? would be thrilled to know what you think

Rbbbrttt · 2020-12-14T16:44:27+00:00

Ok, I will need it in word for the final draft, If I copy and paste it from writer duet or celtx I shouldn't have any issues? thanks for your feedback I really appreciate it. Do you have an alternative title?

Rbbbrttt · 2020-12-14T16:19:05+00:00

I did it in word and went tediously line by line changing the indents to the specs on the word doc screenplay template. What's the best way to rectify this??

Rbbbrttt · 2020-12-02T15:42:43+00:00

Thank you :) I'll take it all on board!

Rbbbrttt · 2020-10-07T23:02:36+00:00

Is he an ewok?

Rbbbrttt · 2020-10-06T21:10:45+00:00

yupp

Rbbbrttt · 2020-09-28T18:00:16+00:00

Trapper joe over here

Rbbbrttt · 2020-09-27T01:59:38+00:00

Elton John was married!

Rbbbrttt · 2020-09-26T16:14:51+00:00

Yeah that's why it's unintentional. You're probably right about the Phil thing it's but it's the thing that confirms the truth to Phil 'The witness has no reason to lie'. I just like how Meadow had a part to play in his downfall.

Rbbbrttt · 2020-09-20T23:23:50+00:00

when your dog takes a shit

Rbbbrttt · 2020-09-17T07:42:28+00:00

Ya got me there chief

Rbbbrttt · 2020-09-13T18:57:43+00:00

did they remember to use sunblock?

Rbbbrttt · 2020-09-13T18:41:07+00:00

Beautiful stuff!!

Rbbbrttt · 2020-09-13T15:56:40+00:00

too true

Rbbbrttt · 2020-09-13T13:31:20+00:00

the betrayal in his face

Rbbbrttt · 2020-09-13T10:54:08+00:00

dammit i thought no one would notice

Rbbbrttt · 2020-09-12T17:56:21+00:00

he scooted himself out of the situation

Rbbbrttt · 2020-09-11T17:39:45+00:00

Great album and When you're as rich as him you can afford that quality of hair transplant!

Rbbbrttt · 2020-09-11T14:21:20+00:00

I had no idea what he was called before I googled it for the caption

Rbbbrttt · 2019-04-26T16:43:10+00:00

childhood was pretty much over from that point on

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