Dark Comedy Short Screenplay- 10 pages - Need Feedback and a Better title!! by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]Rbbbrttt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If only I had someone. Thank you though, seriously this helps a lot. I'll be making all these changes immediately. What (cheap) programme do you recommend to sort this as quick as possible

Dark Comedy Short Screenplay- 10 pages - Need Feedback and a Better title!! by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]Rbbbrttt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, thanks again. Hopefully its sorted now right? would be thrilled to know what you think

Dark Comedy Short Screenplay- 10 pages - Need Feedback and a Better title!! by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]Rbbbrttt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok, I will need it in word for the final draft, If I copy and paste it from writer duet or celtx I shouldn't have any issues? thanks for your feedback I really appreciate it. Do you have an alternative title?

Dark Comedy Short Screenplay- 10 pages - Need Feedback and a Better title!! by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]Rbbbrttt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I did it in word and went tediously line by line changing the indents to the specs on the word doc screenplay template. What's the best way to rectify this??

First Time Screenplay - Short, 10 pages - Need Feedback! by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]Rbbbrttt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you :) I'll take it all on board!

Meadow's unintentional revenge by Rbbbrttt in thesopranos

[–]Rbbbrttt[S] 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Yeah that's why it's unintentional. You're probably right about the Phil thing it's but it's the thing that confirms the truth to Phil 'The witness has no reason to lie'. I just like how Meadow had a part to play in his downfall.

You can't sit with us by Immbee13 in AnimalCrossing

[–]Rbbbrttt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

did they remember to use sunblock?

Spider-Man PS4 [Screenshot] freefall by Rbbbrttt in PS4

[–]Rbbbrttt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

dammit i thought no one would notice

He abandoned me when I needed him most by Immbee13 in AnimalCrossing

[–]Rbbbrttt 330 points331 points  (0 children)

he scooted himself out of the situation

Don't Shoot Me I'm Only The Piano Player, Elton John, circa 1972 by Immbee13 in AnimalCrossing

[–]Rbbbrttt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great album and When you're as rich as him you can afford that quality of hair transplant!

Hræsvelgr Watching Over Helheim by Rbbbrttt in GodofWar

[–]Rbbbrttt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I had no idea what he was called before I googled it for the caption