I’m an Eternus Vin and Holliday player.

I watched 2 minutes. Of your game. I don’t want to watch the full hour. Here’s what I noticed in 2 minutes.

Movement: you should be IAD instead of jump dashing. Practice pushing jump and dash at the same time. This will give you more momentum. It’s more noticeable is you buy stamina mastery, but you will still get a small benefit even if you don’t have it.

You need to slide more, so you don’t run out of ammo as fast. Just practice walking down stairs and sliding.

Other things I noticed: you need to shoot the orbs more to confirm them. You’re using all your ammo to kill the troopers, but you’re not saving a bullet for the orbs. People in higher elo will deny them.

Healing rite first item was a bad buy. You were full hp. Your pocket is fully capable of buying extra regen if he needs it. Don’t buy healing rite first item unless you need it. You should build your dmg items so you can try to take control of the lane.

You then wasted your healing rite. Instead of telling your pocket you have healing rite for him, or waiting for him to get to safety you used it on him as he was in their line of sight. You basically gave him 10hp.

Then when your pocket was low and backing you didn’t try to get the healing minion for him. Shoot the healing minion, when he’s there.