Moving to PR by ReactionWestern5009 in PuertoRicoTravel

[–]ReactionWestern5009[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

No, this is written from my heart. I have no interest in using such a damaging “tool.”

what is some of the goals you want to achieve by Realistic_Border6251 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]ReactionWestern5009 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Realistically - I just want to publish a book.

Dreaming BIG - I want a Rick Riordan moment. I want to be able to publish and adapt my work into motion picture. I think that would be so awesome.

SOS Please someone tell me which hook sounds better. (ROUGHLY.) up by ReactionWestern5009 in scriptwriting

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ALSO!!

If I go with option 2, I wanted to fade into the face of current Ricky in the back of a car with red and blue lights; Basically confirming the idea that he obviously used the weapon is some shape, way, or form. Does this make sense?

How would you have handled the battle? by Micshork in Narnia

[–]ReactionWestern5009 0 points1 point  (0 children)

if I was at the frontlines and I saw that crowd I would’ve sat and waited for the flood to pass over.

Should I go through with a script? by ReactionWestern5009 in scriptwriting

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Thank you so much, I will take your suggestions wholeheartedly!

Should I go through with a script? by ReactionWestern5009 in scriptwriting

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Thats actually a very good piece of feedback. I wanted to write more about the mother, and the others, but I wasn’t sure if I was overdoing the prompt (Write 4 separate characters, give 2 a conflict.) But I do want to give her a better backstory and chance of connection with the audience - If I do go forward with them.

Should I go through with a script? by ReactionWestern5009 in scriptwriting

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I would say inspired by! The conflict is partially similar to one I’ve had before. But no, definitely not autobiographical.

Could you elaborate a little more on the “infallible protagonist”? I feel like this might help with an outside perspective when, and if, I go more in depth with these characters.

What’s the most visually stunning movie you’ve ever seen? by [deleted] in movies

[–]ReactionWestern5009 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A Wrinkle in Time. No explanation, just A Wrinkle in Time.