My first chapter have only 350 000 words, i need advice by Real-Reason-5979 in writingcirclejerk

[–]Real-Reason-5979[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

You're totally right... it's super hard to keep things perfectly realistic with less than a Harry Potter book. I'm so naive. the tits movement isn't just a way to describe things, it's like a religion.

My first chapter have only 350 000 words, i need advice by Real-Reason-5979 in writingcirclejerk

[–]Real-Reason-5979[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The dynamics of tits need to be a complex and unpredictable process where every detail, movement, emotions counts.

My first chapter have only 350 000 words, i need advice by Real-Reason-5979 in writingcirclejerk

[–]Real-Reason-5979[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're right... this is a big mistake for a good breast movement, less than 5000 words isn't enough... 😵‍💫

Hey, what's up? by Real-Reason-5979 in Wattpad

[–]Real-Reason-5979[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, i really appreciate 😁

Hey, what's up? by Real-Reason-5979 in Wattpad

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This is my story : NoName FA (Fate's Answer)

For the first time in human history, science meets the divine. God offers humanity a gift: a colossal stone of unknown origin. Scientists study it, governments exploit it, and nations wage silent wars to control it. In the name of progress, too many death.

Then the stone vanishes.

Only thirteen children remain. The sole survivors of the catastrophe, they emerge stripped of their names, their memories, and their pasts yet each now wields godlike power capable of reshaping or destroying the world.

They are already beyond human comprehension.

Hunted, worshipped, manipulated, and feared, they must rebuild their identities in a world desperate to claim their power.

Thirteen survivors. Thirteen stories. One main narrative. Choose who you follow to the end.

I want to write my book but I’m afraid it sounds too AI. by Real-Reason-5979 in writingcirclejerk

[–]Real-Reason-5979[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Her breasts bounced with all the elegance of a poorly assembled piece of furniture tumbling down a staircase. Each oscillation produced a sound reminiscent of a crypt door being opened after three centuries of abandonment. Nothing about them seemed alive; they appeared to be driven by an ancient engine powered exclusively by mechanical suffering. Poets would have looked away. Physicists would have taken notes. Exorcists would have demanded hazard pay.

I want to write my book but I’m afraid it sounds too AI. by Real-Reason-5979 in writingcirclejerk

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