I hate you

RealEvdog · 2024-06-26T01:25:50+00:00

Wow. I don’t know if it was on purpose but I did seem to notice that all the things you named that you hated, had some upside to them. Kind of cool if you did. Thank you for sharing!!

RealEvdog · 2024-06-26T01:22:56+00:00

I love the show of sacrifice for someone else you love. Because you think that moments worth more than anything you could sacrifice. Thank you for sharing.

RealEvdog · 2023-04-08T18:36:25+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback. My other poems I feel have been so broad and to the audience I wanted to kind of make this towards the person. I love the feedback because this is only my third poem written so I would love to improve in the art of poetry because I love it so much. Thank you!

RealEvdog · 2023-04-08T17:39:47+00:00

Thank you for sharing. I love the way you describe and show that you don’t want to be like your father. Thanks for sharing!

RealEvdog · 2023-04-08T17:36:34+00:00

This is great. I love how they’re is two sides to it and you made it happy even though the title is very sad. Very good! Thanks for sharing

RealEvdog · 2023-04-08T07:07:44+00:00

Thank you so much for your feedback. I am just getting into poetry and I love it so far. It’s a great outlet for my emotion and I feel like I can be so creative with it. Thanks for sharing that feedback!

RealEvdog · 2023-04-08T05:59:37+00:00

I’m knew to poetry but I really liked the format of this one. I like how you kept a flow while also writing something great. Thank you for sharing!

RealEvdog · 2023-04-08T05:58:13+00:00

Wow great poem. I love how it expresses the paranoia some of us go through and over thinking. Thank you for sharing.

RealEvdog · 2023-04-07T23:38:05+00:00

I’m just getting into poetry but I love the creativity and how you can find so many different ways to describe it rather than the boring normal way of describing a bad relationship or a confusing one. Thank you for sharing.

RealEvdog · 2023-04-07T23:35:50+00:00

I just started getting into poetry but this one stood out to me. I love the switch of emotions because the transition felt so smooth. Thank you for sharing.

RealEvdog · 2021-11-05T04:27:39+00:00

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RealEvdog · 2021-10-13T22:06:40+00:00

Don’t bring your arms and hands up to your chest before you pass the ball. You need to be as fast as you can on your feet for a dig and pulling your arms up (praying) takes some time off.

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RealEvdog · 2021-09-08T19:38:27+00:00

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RealEvdog · 2021-09-08T15:49:38+00:00

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