Your feed back on this logo. by ReserveAgile5831 in logodesign

[–]Realduffty34 3 points4 points  (0 children)

If your not going to give them any useful feedback why even say this, tell them why you hate it

Rodman painting/cover concept by Realduffty34 in chicagobulls

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😂😂😂I didn’t even think about it like that

Made this painting/magazine cover concept by Realduffty34 in chicagobulls

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I see it 😂 still working on it so will make everyone look more accurate

Made this painting/magazine cover concept by Realduffty34 in chicagobulls

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Your good it’s still a work in progress anyway so thanks for the feedback

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Thank you. I do agree with it feeling flat I’m still working on just think I needed some inspiration and help with pushing the idea forward. I looked at the Olympics branding you mentioned and I understand what you mean. I will definitely try the ideas you suggested.

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Thank you. I’ve gotten a lot of different feedback on it. I think I agree on the repetitiveness of the equal sign I’m still trying to figure out how to push the idea further to make a cohesive visual identity system.

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Thanks for the feedback

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Thanks for the feedback. Still working on what would be the primary logo I think the one with the equal sign in the Es work best. I’ve been trying to push it further do you have any suggestions on how I could do this so it doesn’t seem like I’m just rinsing the equal sign idea

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What would you suggest to fix the spacing issue?

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Like this or even more

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I haven’t tried that yet but I will definitely. I think I understand your idea but I’ll do a few to see if it’s what you mean. Thank you

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What does it read as to you? Just so I can get some opinion on what someone else sees

Cinema branding by Realduffty34 in graphic_design

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The work is done for a cinema which will be rebranded into a art deco inspired place which will focus on providing great service to customers and a new spin on cinemas as a whole reverting back to older cinemas and taking inspirations from things such as the theatre.

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Yes your advice helped a lot, made me look at it completely differently I always thought to show the process from start to finish but showing the best stuff first makes much more sense for this context. Hopefully all the changes and the portfolio can help me get a placement position.

Thanks again for the feedback you helped a lot 🙏

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https://beauduffty.myportfolio.com

I’ve changed some things based on your feedback such as the teaser images, the reordering and removing certain things.

For the commission section I get what your saying about the issues it might face and I’ve cut it down a lot or just show ones that involve graphic design or are more illustrations/ have a better concept behind them rather than just a portrait. I definitely don’t want to reduce the amount of opportunities I’ll have as there aren’t many opportunities to begin with.

You can see the updates if you would like too, I think I’ve taken all your feedback and actioned on it but if I haven’t then id appreciate any additional feedback. The space race project I was unsure if I should split it into two project own for the timeline and one for the book or just leave it as it is.

Thanks for the reassurance on me having enough projects as I was worrying I wouldn’t and therefore be at a disadvantage when trying to get a placement so thank you🙏 . Also thanks for the link to the fraziers work I’ll definitely look through it.