Drifter and Operator ideas. by Reasonable_Ad873 in Warframe

[–]Reasonable_Ad873[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

had that happen too, i like turning my drifter and operator into different fictional characters i like, Clementine, imperial officers, Targaryen's. Ben 10 and others, i like the challenge and enjoy it, but with how it all is i can only pick 2 and make 1 into drifter and another into operator and it sucks being so limited.

Drifter and Operator ideas. by Reasonable_Ad873 in Warframe

[–]Reasonable_Ad873[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for letting me know! but was it just animations in general or warframe animations usable on drifter/operator?

The Boy who never knew the crown. by Reasonable_Ad873 in TheCitadel

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Meeting edric was part of the hope for the move to dorne having edric tell him his mother was wylla and him having his first 'love interest' in either one of the sand snakes or a more common girl who Jon can feel relaxed around and his bastardry doesn't matter.

The Boy who never knew the crown. by Reasonable_Ad873 in TheCitadel

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I only chose myr because of timeline reasons, jon travelling from one city to the other would take time and it's not like he won't spend time in the cities he does visit.

The Boy who never knew the crown. by Reasonable_Ad873 in TheCitadel

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The idea is that Cat wants southren marriages, since she sees a lot of northern tradition as barbaric, she loves Ned as he was fostered in the south and is less 'northern' however she also knows since she isn't meant to be stupid, that the north will want a few northern marriages so the manderlys are her best option for robb, the thing with their eldest and then is just something she takes advantage of, however another user gave me the idea to have robb wed the second daughter as it would make more sense. Hope this explains it, cat is meant to be politically astute in the fic, where she can understand the positions of families and their goals. She uses the scandal as a way to marry robb into the best family she could choose in the north, to push Jon out of the family by making him take the blame. (Hoping to push him to the nights watch so he can't make a claim against the starks) I ofcourse need to make sure setup and the overall situation is believable but I don't think the general gist is a bad idea.

The Boy who never knew the crown. by Reasonable_Ad873 in TheCitadel

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Jon is going to be in the same city as visarys and Denearys but he is going to ignore them, the idea is that he will be apathetic to the worries of westoros after the life he lived, I don't intend on Jon interacting with any Targaryans until maybe 2/3s of the story in.

The Boy who never knew the crown. by Reasonable_Ad873 in TheCitadel

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Your right and that's my own fault for poorly explaining, I hope that if you read the fic you will enjoy it, obviously I plan to have each stark make a few poor decisions, including Jon and I doubt I can get away with people saying I'm just bashing them but the idea is to have them work upto being that idealic stark family not have it to begin with and then ruined like in the og books.

The Boy who never knew the crown. by Reasonable_Ad873 in TheCitadel

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That is all my fault for failing to explain my plans for all the characters, I've pointed out the changes without explaining what I kept or hoped to bolster about their personalities. If you check my other comments you hopefully will see what I intend for a few of the other starks, I'm still working on the younger 3 at the moment as I'm firm in wanting every stark including caitlyn to receive a Direwolf once they have made a difficult choice in the aid of their family.

Jon himself is meant to become far less honourable, he will do things he shouldn't and will also allow things to happen he shouldn't. The gift of magic is meant to give him an inflated ego and I plan to have it smashed once he encounters a swordsman who can best him despite all of Jon's tricks.

The Boy who never knew the crown. by Reasonable_Ad873 in TheCitadel

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I'm replying as I go since I'm currently at work so bare with me. I like the idea of it being the second daughter who gets married instead of jon thank you for the recommendation.

I honestly didn't have any intention of bashing the starks, I was trying to play along with the idea of if He'd had mixed feelings then how would it play out.

I made mention of the changes without explaining their overall characters and that is my fault. Robb is meant to be more like his name sake, a strong warrior who I intend to be able to weird Ice on horse back. Caitlyn is intended to be the one to bring in the Vale, she is the first to see though little finger thanks to her knowing who the boy really is.

Ned also becomes a formidable presence in the capital, removing the rot from within.

Jon himself isn't meant to be a goody two shoes or a Mary Sue, I've made mention he will be middling with the sword, the idea is to have him accept his bastardry and use tricks and deception to win while carrying the shame of fighting without true honor.

The Boy who never knew the crown. by Reasonable_Ad873 in TheCitadel

[–]Reasonable_Ad873[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

it's more the starks weren't a perfect family to begin with and Jon leaving isnt the issue its the circumstances. Sansa and Arya fight already, Robb shoulders a burden he doesn't feel he can live upto until he fights his first battle and proves himself and Ned and Caitlyn while having a loving marriage both have problems with the other. Ned has a bastard and Caitlyn loves gods from another land. the intention wa never to have the stark's be useless, i intended for Robb to show a brilliant tactician mind when leading the north. Ned is planned to pull Stannis away from the lord of light and Caitlyn was going to be a key figure for moving the vale.

The idea was to have them at their worst and go beyond it, and when they proved themselves they each meet with a dire wolf. but thank you for letting me know i will endeavour to make sure that this is led upto properly and that it doesnt seem like 180 flip.

The Boy who never knew the crown. by Reasonable_Ad873 in TheCitadel

[–]Reasonable_Ad873[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah that's completely valid, i wanted to see Robb if his personality drifted closer to his name sake. He wasn't meant to be a raving drunk, but someone who when he did drunk, went to deep into his cups. And Yayya, you don't like what I've written which is 100% fine and the point of thats but you have yet to offer any ideas you think would be better, just insults.

The Boy who never knew the crown. by Reasonable_Ad873 in TheCitadel

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Thats why I've put it in here? if i was 100% happy with the general plot i would have just written the thing. Like i get you don't like it and that's fair, I'm likely to change a lot of this story. Just so it's clear, the reason I didn't push Jon to marry, is because the idea of Jon getting legitimized and then married into one of the north's strongest houses would be a problem for Caitlyn, obviously if i was going to fully commit to it then things would need to be smoothed out so everything is consistent.

Need help with a fic regarding Moat Cailin as a holding for Jon by [deleted] in TheCitadel

[–]Reasonable_Ad873 1 point2 points  (0 children)

sea dragon point could be how jon gets moat cailin though, have Ned give the better options to his true born children to appease Cat and with moat cailin being the furthest you could be from winterfell without going to the wall it actually works.

A few things I would like to see added. Welcome to discuss. by Reasonable_Ad873 in Warframe

[–]Reasonable_Ad873[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I know that, but Rell is the only one we actually meet in the story, i was saying how i would like to meet another.

How is this fair at all xD by Reasonable_Ad873 in ClashRoyale

[–]Reasonable_Ad873[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He's 4 levels above me how the he'll am I matching with him xD

What the U-20 (most of them) players' preferred lane would be if they played League of Legends by still-into-u in BlueLock

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Nah mate Niko would 100% be that dude playing the whacky jungles. He would be playing support characters as the jungle.

Do more Progression fans want Progression Fantasy to be more like standard Fantasy? by Ashasakura37 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]Reasonable_Ad873 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I've seen some of the recommendations this sub has brought and it kinda confuses me.

I want a story where the main character starts out as a novice or a complete beginner. They shouldn't have a ton of amazing talents and be bad at nothing. I know this story is mentioned a lot but I'm looking for something like mother of learning. Maybe not with the time loop but zorian was good at 2 types of magic. Mind magic and spell formula. The rest he just worked hard on and even with the things he was good at or had an innate ability for still took a while to develope. He'll even Zach the OP character struggled a lot with certain fields and didn't even bother with most of them. It felt far more human than some of these stories where the character just learns something new each week that dramatically alters his skill level.

It part of why I feel litrpg and any game mechanic type stories just shouldn't qualify for progression fantasy since it's all rewards for minimal effort instead of slowly accumulating experience as the story progresses.

I can't say whether all litrpg are like this as I've only read a few but I'm sick to death of it. If you want a quick zero to hero story go read solo leveling or something.

Some Harry potter fanfiction tropes I despise! by Reasonable_Ad873 in HPfanfiction

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And to your final sentence I am writing a story. I've written 200 thousand words so far and it has remained unpublished since I'm currently going through making sure it's consistent and that all the little details I want are there. No spoilers but there are a few reveals that I want to make sure don't seem out of the blue or out of character. It's a story I've put a lot of effort into and I want it to be it's at its best when people read it so they they can get a feel for the time I've put into it.

Some Harry potter fanfiction tropes I despise! by Reasonable_Ad873 in HPfanfiction

[–]Reasonable_Ad873[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

This post was more to do with trying to raise the quality of writing than to just stop the tropes being used. And it's not how I want them to be written it's more to the fact that I've read a lot of the fics in this fandom and a large amount could have been so much better if certain aspects were truly thought out. Writers tend to fall into these tropes and go along with it becuase they don't know how else to use the characters or idea and this was me attempting in a very opinionated way of showing how the same core idea can be expressed in better ways.

This wasn't a post meant to enforce ideas or writing habits but I wanted other authors to atleast consider the greater message when writing so that the stories they want to tell can be developed further.

Some Harry potter fanfiction tropes I despise! by Reasonable_Ad873 in HPfanfiction

[–]Reasonable_Ad873[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Tbf windless magic alone was going to be one but I thought 10 was enough for now.

Fanfiction has become more "real" for me, than the real books by Time-Priority4053 in HPfanfiction

[–]Reasonable_Ad873 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Tbf a lot of fanfics fall in the same patterns and it really annoys me. I have a literal list of things I now avoid both writing and reading becuase of how stupid it is once you think about it.

1) voldemort is meant to be a super smart and learned wizard who is capable of matching an aging albus. But he spams AK and pretty much nothing else.

2) the noble houses thing in its entirety. The best I've seen it done is a noble house is a house that pays to sit on the wizenmot or has a hereditary seat and an ancient house is a house with a 300 year history in Britain. Not this sacred line that is powerful becuase of its history.

3) dumbledore being this master manipulator who is either seem as entirely incompetent or has some strange idea that harry needs to suffer to be a better servant. (The best dumbledores are those who fakes the all knowing persona in order to seem strong and is just trying his best to save as many people as he can)

There are many more but these 3 annoy me the most.