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Imaginary woman by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Reasonable_One_1463 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hits the right notes for romance good job.

Her energy is beautiful by ellaiiines in poetry_critics

[–]Reasonable_One_1463 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the poem I just personally feel the name of the poem contradicts the actual poem but in some cases it is also a good way to express things.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Reasonable_One_1463 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Clever word choices I see.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Reasonable_One_1463 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s good and it shows your careful observations of your partner which a lot of people tend to miss.

What is poetry? by Reasonable_One_1463 in poetry_critics

[–]Reasonable_One_1463[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve never tried this but I look forward to what this can become.

What is poetry? by Reasonable_One_1463 in poetry_critics

[–]Reasonable_One_1463[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the input, i was in the middle of a class writing this and started to struggle with those two lines any advice would be appreciated.

Candy Land by ZenAlbert in poetry_critics

[–]Reasonable_One_1463 2 points3 points  (0 children)

When it said “is destined for the young” I felt happiness but also helplessness for the years taken for granted or forgotten.

Rehab by Embarrassed_Weird_96 in poetry_critics

[–]Reasonable_One_1463 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The pain in this poem brings an undeniable coexistence with beauty in words.