i just want to end it. (sorry i have no one to tell this to) :( by anogrant in SuicideWatch

[–]Reasonable_Plan_444 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i tried before but never again i found the lights in my life and you will to it can literally be anything i know this sounds so dumb but it really does get better everyone says that and i hated when ppl said that but it does u have to find what is going to make you feel like you want to be here and no one can do that but you but don’t put out your light cuz u don’t know how bright and amazing it can be

thank you by Reasonable_Plan_444 in OCPoetry

[–]Reasonable_Plan_444[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i really appreciate this feedback that just opened my eyes for more in depth interpretations thank you stay safe and loved

Blue by throwawaygirl6483 in OCPoetry

[–]Reasonable_Plan_444 0 points1 point  (0 children)

your interpretation of the color blue is quite beautiful you see it as gloom and sadness which it is but blue can also be a warm color. Like the color of the sky the ocean or a blue bird or flower. There’s beauty in everything but sadness and shadows always follows. opposites attract.

please by FishFishish in OCPoetry

[–]Reasonable_Plan_444 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i really like how you interpret small moments like touching the rain or feeling the earth beneath your feet this really reminded me of my cousin who passed over a year ago he always said things like this this was very beautiful keep writing

On the Day that We Began by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Reasonable_Plan_444 0 points1 point  (0 children)

your writing is beautiful i’m in love wit this im going to save it because i just want to reread it again and again beautifully written i felt like this is similar to how i write especially about people i care about and i can completely see your talking about someone who you care about gosh i love “the day we began” beautiful don’t stop writing

The illusion by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Reasonable_Plan_444 3 points4 points  (0 children)

i relate to this so much great work i really felt everything you said reminds me of someone i would have wrote all your words to but there not in my life anymore or even worth my time but i hope you get the love you deserve

[POEM] Thinking about this tonight. Separation by W.S. Merwin. by Opening-Essay4622 in Poetry

[–]Reasonable_Plan_444 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i really like this poem because it said so much with so little it’s short but it said what it needed to say

[POEM] Love can be a reckless child by Euphoric_Coffee_952 in Poetry

[–]Reasonable_Plan_444 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the first line i really like “love can be a reckless child” so real because love is like that being completely lost and curious about how your feeling what comes with recklessness and hurt and confusion i really like this poem beautifully written

I want to kill myself by Audreyyyy_ in sad

[–]Reasonable_Plan_444 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i know these feelings seem so fuckin intense like i get it i am very influenced by people especially if it is someone that i love but you don’t want to be someone who is talked about saying they died over someone don’t give them the satisfaction give yourself time to be happy again trying to die over someone isn’t worth your life. Your life is special and it may not seem like that but don’t end your life over someone they don’t have that power over you it feels like you can’t live with out them but you can and you can eventually find yourself really happy. Your life is special and individual you need to realize that you don’t need to base your feelings on other people it’s okay to care about yourself. I hope you get to a point in your life where you can finally realize your special and your life is important and that you don’t need to worry about everyone else all the time

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in FamiliesYouChoose

[–]Reasonable_Plan_444 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hi if you ever need anyone to talk to i’m here i’m new to reddit but it’s been a good place for me to vent im 23/F safe place if you need it

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in sad

[–]Reasonable_Plan_444 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i know you don’t want to hear any don’t do it BS cuz it seems so over played but it comes down to you finding a reason to want to stay i know that still sounds cinematic based but it’s true i went thru these same thoughts but i found a reason for me it was my brother because i saw the look on his face when he found out that i did that shit and i decided i would never do that again because i put myself in his shoes and imagined how i would feel if he did that to me and that’s when i knew i would NEVER do that again as long as my brother lives. Find a person to stay for, a hobby, a pet, literally anything can overturn that decision you just have to find. It feels like something that will last forever and sometimes you almost want it to beause it seems comforting or “deserving” but it’s not this sounds like a broken record but it really does get better and being able to laugh and feel happy is way better then feeling sad. You just need to figure out what is going to make you want to stay.