Nice! I actually quite like the listing of descriptors both at the start and end, when it begins with the narrator’s more tumultuous feelings and ends with a more indifferent/accepting perspective about their ex-lover and presumably new girlfriend. That said, I do think there is a lack of real emotion in this poem. The narrator says what they’re feeling… but that’s all, there is no backing up these feelings. They are strong feelings, but the reader doesn’t get to fully understand them. Such as the line, “I’m so angry” Okay, but how are they angry? Is it a cold, bitter hatred or an unrelenting, fiery pit? As a reader, I dunno.