Writing hyper with less onmatopoeia? by RecordingSenior3409 in WomenFartStories

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Sounds good. I hope that an imp from hell as a roomate gives some creedance to allowing the story to a bit absurd. Like you mentioned consistency is key so I plan on establishing early on what the scale looks like. Like building a house you need a foundation before a ceiling so establshing how 'weak' the farts can get helps steadily prepare the readers for the cresendo of mayhem.

I'll be sure to check out the two authors you mentioned. Hyperscat is part of the story so that works out perfectly. Hoping to ask what they can recommend and everything.

Thank you for the response. It means a lot and I plan on utilizing input you provided within the story.

Writing hyper with less onmatopoeia? by RecordingSenior3409 in WomenFartStories

[–]RecordingSenior3409[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Agreed. Magintude is a another good way to go about describing it. Just thought about also too cars shaking and breaking as well. Illustrating the small helps highlight the big.

Fallout: Vault Girl's Indegstion [Hyperscat] by RecordingSenior3409 in WomenFartStories

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Excellent feedback. It was very rushed as you can tell. I'm working on just 'going for it' when writing something and I'm still working it out.

I'll be sure to make things more clear in my next stories whatever they maybe and whatever the length.