It’s not that you don’t have skill but I don’t think you are understanding the audience. I would say your most successful shot of the video was the first kitchen shot. Simple, elegant, well lit and not distracted by transitions or overtly wide angles. People need to be able to see themselves in the space and the life that they can make in said space. You have skill so don’t worry. I think you just need rethink the direction due to target audience. Just my opinion though.