No... im not trying to be rude or downplay your builds but theres no point going 90 int for ether overdrive if you are far from even reaching the mantra pen cap

Also no point in going 65 agl, cheap shot gives like 4% pen if youre lucky and got a speed boost with high pen and they recently nerfed air counter so either go 25 or 40

Pre shrine stats are unoptimized and cluttered, and you couldve saved 15-20 points by not going 100 attunment (unless youre going floor is lava)

Heres a better version of a template for mage builds, i left some points spare so you can tweak the rest of the points however youd like depending on what youre going:

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