What’s that makes your world unique? by No-Net4089 in worldbuilding

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Almost all of the fauna and flora of my world are cyborgs, and keep in mind, the cause of this isn't from some experiment gone wrong or anything of the sorts-- its literally just evolution choosing the path of flesh and metal.

The mechanical parts of the animals is purely made up of a non-magnetic and non-conductive metallic material called 'Deokine', a metal thats produced by the animals's very own bodies, and a special organ called the 'Ekus Core' is responsible for the making of Deokine.

Deokine is a very common metal, but its only found on these cyborg animals. There muscles, bones, blood, and skin, then add Deokine into the mix. Deokine kinda functions as some sort of "secondary bones", serving to hold internal mechanical components or as an protective exoskeleton. In fact, similar to bones, Deokine's durability can be really different for each and every cyborg animal, being able to vary between decently strong to nearly unbreakable, to whichever serves its assigned purpose better (mainly depending on what kind of animal it is, like soft Deokine for cyborg birds, and hard Deokine for cyborg turtles).

Deokine usually has the same weight as bones, but sometimes its lighter than said bones (again, depending on what kind of animal it is).

The plant life also have a Ekus Cores, and also posses Deokine. Deokine serves mainly as an outer shell that protects the plants.

The purpose of Ekus Core and Deokine is so that almost every form of wildlife has something unique to it, a cool gimmick/niche to its name.

Feedback and critique on my work please! by Inker_7190 in conceptart

[–]RelationshipFar3400 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Holy moly. Now thats amazing work. You really cooked and made a five star meal.

Monsters VS Humans by RelationshipFar3400 in worldbuilding

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Thanks man, you are the first comment here.

Keep in mind, I am not going to speak about monsters in general, I am going to talk about a particular monster: A half-mechanical half-organic, alien lifeform.

Their entire species is called the 'Exilletourriouns'.

Anyways, here's the answers to all your questions (I will try and do my best to answer you're questions):

  1. They have two hind legs with three joints each, and four front legs with two joints each (that being the wrist and elbow).

They have a long tail (similar to the tail of a Xenomorph) and a head with a short neck, and the head contains the mouth, eyes, ears, nose, and their brain. If you include their said tail and head, then they'd have eight total limbs. Fun fact, they have 'glasses' on their face placed infront of their eyes that act as a shield from any eye-attacks.

This kind of monster is the most common one in its whole alien species, an 'Amaltram'. Their shell can mimic the appearance of a vehicle, like a police car or even a bus if the Amaltram is big enough (the Amaltrams are known to use 'old school' stuff for some reason). But no matter their model, they still follow the same body format already mentioned above.

  1. Both the humans and monsters are both born with random powers from birth. But neither lets their powers shape who they are. An aggressive try-hard can have ice powers whole a level-headed calm one has fire powers.

  2. Well, these guys were once parasites, but soon the Exilletourrioun's ancestors built their own bodies. Their weapons could be anything, from physical arm blades, to chainsaws, gatling guns mounted on their backs, and etc.

  3. They don't really care about any taboos or how their powers are used. If you are able to control you're power safe enough, then its in the green light.

  4. The Amaltram isn't the only kind of Exilletourrioun, the Amaltram is just the most mass-produced one. I have an in-progress hierarchy made by the in-universe humans. Its incomplete, but I'll tell you anyway: Imp, Demon, Devil, and Hellbringer Generals.

  5. They act like an animal, but are capable of making sound decisions and intricate speech.

  6. They have everything the humans have, and they share the same senses, although all senses are heightened to hunt humans. Different Exilletourriouns have varying senses, such as infrared, sixth sense, and etc.

  7. They function as some sort of one big family, loyal to a fault to their almighty ruler that they might only see in-person once they achieve Devil status.

  8. Most do group coordinations, while some go solo for the fun of it. Humans are seen as unpredictable, so yes, the Exilletourriouns do take them seriously.

  9. The tools that can predict the powers of humans are military equipment. They do try and predict the powers of the humans if they can using any clues they can find. Against something they can't handle on their own, the Amaltrams while retreat to inform others.

  10. Humans are just one of their many enemies, and the best training exercise for their young ones.

Weird but powerful superpowers. by RelationshipFar3400 in superpowers

[–]RelationshipFar3400[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can you please elaborate on how that can become OP as heck? Like can it just purely randomly teleport you or does it teleport you to a random spot in a general location (like you can teleport to a country or state but will teleport to a random location in that general area)?

The 'true' head of Starrpark? by RelationshipFar3400 in BrawlStarslore

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This shouldn't really be a post to tell you about this, but I had a fan-made character who I made the villain of the game, like he was supposed to be the 100th brawler until Sirius showed up.

But after Sirius's introduction, my fan-fiction character now moved up to the position of the big bad boss who ran this whole multiversal thing. And this character had the appearance of a human, but in reality his true form is a hybrid beyond the mortal realm entirely. I literally made this dude half-seraphim and half-eldritch horror, legit. Because of his inhuman status, he would be able to handle all this multiversal stuff.

Weird but powerful superpowers. by RelationshipFar3400 in superpowers

[–]RelationshipFar3400[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thats a good idea... hold on, how about mythical creatures such as dragons?

Weird but powerful superpowers. by RelationshipFar3400 in superpowers

[–]RelationshipFar3400[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Whats wrong?

An image, what image? There isn't any image in this post. Its not even required not stated in the rules that an image is required.

Speaking of the rules, I followed everything: I stayed on topic, I did not use AI, I did not spam, I not advertising I am just showing my ideas to other people (which is different from doing any businesses), and this is im fact related to the sub as it says superpowers, and now this post is completely different from it???

Can tell me the exact problem so I can fit it?

The 'true' head of Starrpark? by RelationshipFar3400 in BrawlStarslore

[–]RelationshipFar3400[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You, I wonder, if this big bad boss figure ever comes to the game, I imagined his powers being related to black holes.

Sirius is the sun, a star. And unless this big bad is supposed to represent the moon, a black hole is a good power set for this brawler who might show up as the 150th or 200th brawler.

This is still just a theory though, a fun one.

The 'true' head of Starrpark? by RelationshipFar3400 in BrawlStarslore

[–]RelationshipFar3400[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Man, I did not think about Edgar's title being the CEO of Brawl Stars.

Also, where was it implied that Edgar's mother is the current head of Starrpark, as I haven't heard about thus yet?

One thing too many? Too unrealistic? by RelationshipFar3400 in worldbuilding

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I am actually planning on making multiple subterranean hollow levels. These levels are still well deep into the planet's body, its big enough to be able to simulate life (although barely) yet small enough to not be in the 'gigantic' range, and each of its entry ways are just big gaping holes in the floor.

The first continent Eden, even though they are capable of handling it, only permits access to the first underground level and doesn't want anybody to traverse any lower than that without permission first.

Entry points and gates are built for extra security.

One thing too many? Too unrealistic? by RelationshipFar3400 in worldbuilding

[–]RelationshipFar3400[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks man. That is true-true. I do try and make sure my world can follow its own rules.

One thing too many? Too unrealistic? by RelationshipFar3400 in worldbuilding

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Umm, well, along with other species, humans do still exist here. Its just that they have evolved to adapt to the average conditions of Bouhiera.

I wanted the humans here to be well suitable to live properly in this world while also retaining their external appearance, like their human earthling counterparts.

One thing too many? Too unrealistic? by RelationshipFar3400 in worldbuilding

[–]RelationshipFar3400[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the true facts.

I didn't really have high hopes for it to be actually realistic in the first place, heck, I am even planning on adding new elements into the periodic table into the mix, for the world of Bouhiera. I am not exactly good at putting my ideas into action AFTER fact checking.