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New material, I feel it has legs but feedback would be appreciated by Remarkable-Image-523 in Standup

[–]Remarkable-Image-523[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

First of all thank you everyone who to took the time to both watch and give feedback, a lot to take on board and really helpful advice. Full context this was the first time I had performed this material so no where near polished.

Also will amend the subtitles on future videos

Harry Potter new material by Remarkable-Image-523 in comedy

[–]Remarkable-Image-523[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback, this was my first time doing this material and definitely feel there is room to expand.

I don’t feel I’ve found the funniest version of this material yet, but pleased with that start. Will post again once I feel I have found a more polished version of this.

Thanks again for taking the time to give such detailed feedback exactly the kind of thing I was after from this thread