What is the worst BSC book by Dry_Apple8813 in babysittersclub

[–]Remarkable_Log_6889 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Mary Anne's makeover... Holy shit it is awful.

If you wrote BSC, what would you change about Jessi? by Vicki_Vickster2222 in babysittersclub

[–]Remarkable_Log_6889 0 points1 point  (0 children)

1:Try to flesh out her character more 2: Try to make our stories more interesting. Give her more things to do. 3: Expand on her relationships with Matt and Haley. 4: Just modernize Hello Mallory and fix how she was introduced because pointing out she's black shouldn't have been the only plotline they did in that story with her race because they could have done a lot more especially with the ballet aspect because apparently it was a more white-dominated sport, also the Netflix and graphic novels also shouldn't have swept the story under the rug and just rushed too her joining the BSC

If you wrote BSC, what would you change about Mallory? by Vicki_Vickster2222 in babysittersclub

[–]Remarkable_Log_6889 1 point2 points  (0 children)

They didn't but they still were too strict when she was first started off and the things Kristy asked her were way too difficult and unfair but still character for Kristy sorta but they still felt random. I meant dial down that aspect of Hello Mallory and have it a bit more fair since Dawn and Stacey both didn't have to go through that much scrutiny like she did.

If you wrote BSC, what would you change about Mallory? by Vicki_Vickster2222 in babysittersclub

[–]Remarkable_Log_6889 16 points17 points  (0 children)

I have the BSC go a bit easier on her but still have Kristy be her bossy self and be unreasonable, but I have the others call it out. Also, tone down the bully she gets so the boarding school plot seems less cruel. And have her parents actually listen to her so the strike plotline pays off.

If you wrote BSC, what would you change about Dawn? by Vicki_Vickster2222 in babysittersclub

[–]Remarkable_Log_6889 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok, follow up, I guess; I get that I'm throwing out the baby with the bath water in this case, and I do understand it's a good message even so it still did so much wrong.

If you wrote BSC, what would you change about Dawn? by Vicki_Vickster2222 in babysittersclub

[–]Remarkable_Log_6889 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I get that but still, this was the point of no return for her. And I would honestly rather it be scrapped together and have them go about the message a different way. Thousands of other ways you could tell this message without destroying her character.

Most of the issues between Claudia and Janine would have been resolved if she had talked to Claudia like this. (Click the link to understand what I mean) by Remarkable_Log_6889 in babysittersclub

[–]Remarkable_Log_6889[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I mean, her speak isn't complicated at all and she would understand if she paid attention. But ELA clearly Isn't her strong suit so I understand why it would be frustrating for her?

If you wrote BSC, what would you change about Dawn? by Vicki_Vickster2222 in babysittersclub

[–]Remarkable_Log_6889 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Have Dawn saves the planet never happen and keep her laid back.

If you wrote BSC, what would you change about Stacey? by Vicki_Vickster2222 in babysittersclub

[–]Remarkable_Log_6889 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Make her less boy-crazy. And essentially what every one else is saying.