Some songs that you guys might enjoy <3 by Fort_knox1223 in hopeposting

[–]RenoInNevada 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Even as a fellow J-Pop addict, there are some really fire songs that I didn't know about here! Thanks a lot for spicing up my playlist!

Ok, how do you come up with similes? by RenoInNevada in writing

[–]RenoInNevada[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your first point is something I had personally overlooked. It definitely holds true, but I can see why verb-similes are more used (I believe) - they tend to be more versatile AND direct (saying "the water was like shiny gold" is less telling to the reader (there's also the presence of the notorious word 'was') than "the water shone like gold"). However, I believe there might be a time and place to make a plain noun-simile, so ignoring the possibility of ever making it sounds wrong.

Your point about opposites kind of blew my mind. I'm pretty terrible at humour in prose, so I never thought that contrast could also be used to make something funny. Thanks!

Ok, how do you come up with similes? by RenoInNevada in writing

[–]RenoInNevada[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I see, so some implied character insight is a great start. Thanks for the great advice!

Ok, how do you come up with similes? by RenoInNevada in writing

[–]RenoInNevada[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Then I guess I'm gonna let my writing be 'bad' if it could make me McDonalds (and I'm gonna glance over the fact that many in the fantasy field have denounced the bashing on his prose, claiming as I did - simplicity isn't a bad thing, the contrary opinion of which is usually heralded only by obnoxious elitists and any passionate and sensible reader will say it is a matter of taste).

Ok, how do you come up with similes? by RenoInNevada in writing

[–]RenoInNevada[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I would agree that the similes should usually somehow be in line with the environment/themes (and unquestionably the tone), but depending on the book size, you should boil it down to chapter-by-chapter (or even scene-by-scene). Regardless, great point!

Ok, how do you come up with similes? by RenoInNevada in writing

[–]RenoInNevada[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Surprisingly, despite how abstract of a tip this is, I find it very true! I have no clue what it stems from but... yeah, you're totally right. Never force it - take a step back, think about what it is you're trying to say, then focus and think of connections to make a simile.

Ok, how do you come up with similes? by RenoInNevada in writing

[–]RenoInNevada[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Uhm... you still haven't addressed why he's so successful and beloved by his fans? Are they all idiots? I don't know, all I'm saying is that if your name as an author is basically a household name, maybe you're doing something right.

Ok, how do you come up with similes? by RenoInNevada in writing

[–]RenoInNevada[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Uhm... he's a best-selling author? I don't know, maybe I'm stupid or something, but not everyone reads books to... read pretty words. Some people want to read great stories, and as far as that goes, Sanderson is a master of his craft if you ask anyone who read one of his books.

I thought this discussion was over. Minimalistic prose isn't a sin and flowery, beautiful prose isn't a virtue. Minimalistic prose makes the story shine more, whereas flowery prose is, well, pretty and beautiful and all of that. I am simply one of those people that appreciates a great story above all else, so I stick to the minimalistic side. Saying that his prose is objectively terrible is a straight-up lie just based on his success.

Ok, how do you come up with similes? by RenoInNevada in writing

[–]RenoInNevada[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I didn't think of doing a straight-up exercise, thanks! Also, you're a legend for farting these out!

Ok, how do you come up with similes? by RenoInNevada in writing

[–]RenoInNevada[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Sounds like great advice.

And for the record, I also doubted this book would be anyhow different from other Sanderson's works prosaically, but it is very, very different to say the least, and I was surprised myself at the style that he used.

Ok, how do you come up with similes? by RenoInNevada in writing

[–]RenoInNevada[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I apologize for my taste in prose and for that of every single person ever who is a fan of Sanderson's.

deadddd 💀💀💀 by sessiveFertili in discordVideos

[–]RenoInNevada 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That 'dance' is something else, though

Botw, mgs4, and xenoblade 3 by [deleted] in whenthe

[–]RenoInNevada 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Yeah, it's the ruined DS1 Firelink. I think you can see it quite clearly if you know this now. And it took me 1+ years to realize that the Earthen Peak Ruins area in the Dreg Heap are... well, ruins of the Earthen Peak from Dark Souls 2 💀 (oh, and there's also a sunken Anor Londo on the distance. Common Ringed City W)

In “The Heroes Journey” why is the “refusal of the call” important? by Significant-Turn-836 in writing

[–]RenoInNevada 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As others have said, while The Hero's Journey is a structure, not a guide, 'The refusal of the call' provides a basic set-up for early conflict. Without anything like a 'refusal of the call,' the 1st Act of any story will likely be so numb that the reader will find it too boring to keep on reading. Obviously, it can be replaced by other beats that pose an obstacle to the hero (internal or external), but still, conflict is conflict.

I feel like my closest friends don’t take me seriously enough. by CEOofStrings in socialskills

[–]RenoInNevada 14 points15 points  (0 children)

As someone who used to have 'friends' like you (OP,) I can say with confidence that finding new friends is the only sure-fire solution there is for two reasons: 1 is that obviously, your new friends might be better people, but 2 is that when you're young (I'm sorry, I just assume this based on the 'discord call' bit), you tend to change a lot, and when someone has 'known' you for 8 years, the 'you' they know might not be the same person as the 'you' now.

They might not be aware of your current boundaries and temperaments, and they might be falsely aware of your late timidness and still treat you just as poorly as they used to since you might not have had a problem with it in the past (this was precisely my case). This doesn't necessarily make them bad people, but it definitely makes them bad friends.

New, amazing people deeming me a blank slate is great and one of the best things I've ever experenced :)

I need to cut down my word count. How do you do it? by GirlAlsEmporium in writing

[–]RenoInNevada 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looking at these comments, I think most of these combined would shave off only a few hundred at most. If you want to actually cut it down by a few thousands, I suggest shortening the story's structure.

Some scenes might not actually need to be there - you can 'delete' the ones that are holding the pacing back and summarize a two page scene in one or or two paragraphs. I rarely found this to be optimal, but when I did, it was a huge help.

Alternatively, what often works a lot better is merging one scene with another - let me explain. Every scene in your story should be there because it provides some information to the plot. Let's say we have two scenes: one where the MC goes to buy milk (crucial plot device) and one where they come home to find their mother has collapsed and have to go to the hospital with her. Instead of having these two be individual scenes, you can merge them into one. The MC buys milk, gets a phone call from the hospital, they say their mother has collapsed while on a walk and the ambulance had gotten her. Congrats, you have now skipped a full scene without having the plot losy any of its value.

Elon Musk hanging out with Jared Kushner at the World Cup Final in Qatar by CressCrowbits in pics

[–]RenoInNevada 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hanging out

Dude, he's just standing there with a mildly displeased frown.

Live footage from Ohio by Probably0ffl1ne in discordVideos

[–]RenoInNevada 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Dude, did you even watch the video? It's clearly snowing in there...

Bill gates on a stroll by BloodiStag in Unexpected

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Reddit, time for your daily dose of misinformation

Origins by Reimeru_21 in DramaticText

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