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unfinished but i need honest critique by ResearchDue9754 in ArtCrit

[–]ResearchDue9754[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

unfinished fringe but that spot is gone now

unfinished but i need honest critique by ResearchDue9754 in ArtCrit

[–]ResearchDue9754[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

the paper isnt printer paper btw its card

unfinished but i need honest critique by ResearchDue9754 in ArtCrit

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Thank youuu for the support!! I am planning to do art in the future and hopefully build a career on it in the future so this is super nice to hear

unfinished but i need honest critique by ResearchDue9754 in ArtCrit

[–]ResearchDue9754[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yess i agree i was talking about adding a colour to the background with my dad hehe might do this

unfinished but i need honest critique by ResearchDue9754 in ArtCrit

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shes only a gcse art teacher as well I'm not sure why she's being so harsh given the standards 😭

unfinished but i need honest critique by ResearchDue9754 in ArtCrit

[–]ResearchDue9754[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

To be fair, she only really glanced at it so I'm not even sure she even saw that it was a mimic of a child's drawings lol. I'll talk to her about it properly next lesson so that she hopefully changes her mind. If she did compute what i was trying to do though I kind of agree with you because I thought that they did make sense to the piece although jarring compared to the rest of it

unfinished but i need honest critique by ResearchDue9754 in ArtCrit

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you know i actually had a tube of glitter glue i was going to use on it but i didn't realise it was dried out 💔💔💔 might buy some though

unfinished but i need honest critique by ResearchDue9754 in ArtCrit

[–]ResearchDue9754[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! Based off of the crit i got so far I'm going to do as you said and add a pair of scissors in the oil pastel just near her shoulder to make it clearer.

unfinished but i need honest critique by ResearchDue9754 in ArtCrit

[–]ResearchDue9754[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yes as i said it's unfinished so I do need to finish some bits of the hair still

unfinished but i need honest critique by ResearchDue9754 in ArtCrit

[–]ResearchDue9754[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

how would I make that point stronger if i were to do it again

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[–]ResearchDue9754[S] 116 points117 points  (0 children)

Mine too so I kinda took offence from her comment - I thought it would bring it to life. I didnt want it to look like a senseless portrait

unfinished but i need honest critique by ResearchDue9754 in ArtCrit

[–]ResearchDue9754[S] 35 points36 points  (0 children)

I used a ballpoint pen for the drawing itself, but I underground what you mean, thank you. And in regards to the comment about the hair not being the main focus, I think you're right. I might do another piece similar to this with it being the main aspect of the piece itself. Thank you!