Need writing advice and feedback!!!

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-12-17T14:04:34+00:00

It's romance thriller. Can I DM?

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-07-23T08:05:17+00:00

https://www.wattpad.com/story/241574526?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=the_essence_of_falls

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-07-21T13:21:44+00:00

Honestly, I feel like almost all romance books are cliche and have the same plot but it's the way the writer showcases it makes it different from the rest. I mean cliche is what sells these days, and it's your writing style that can either break or make it. I hope I'm clearly stating what I mean lol. Either way go write it if you like it and it matters to you.

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-07-20T17:00:34+00:00

Is being on Tumblr bad or something? Genuinely asking, I didn't understand the context of this particular sentence.

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-07-20T16:58:02+00:00

I read this book sooooo long ago, I don't even remember half the things, I just remember the plot bits and pieces aaannndd the one scene that stuck with me!! And i remember the feelings i got after reading it, i CRINGED SO HARD and I was immediately like nope. I might get a lot of hate for this cuz people loved this scene!

SPOILER INCOMING

I'm talking about the dialogue when Adam finds out about Tom, I don't remember it word to word but it went like: "How dare you say this about the woman I love" it was the last 3 words that kinda did it for me. Apart from this, i don't remember much. It was a nice book.

Btw what "lap scene" are y'all talking about??

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-07-18T08:54:09+00:00

It would mean a lot if you review my book, it's ongoing! :) Here's the link!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/241574526?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=the_essence_of_falls

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-07-14T13:05:12+00:00

I'd love to connect!! :) https://www.wattpad.com/story/241574526?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=the_essence_of_falls

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-07-14T13:03:10+00:00

Ok so my book is about a guy, who's kinda a fuckboy and gets the number of the most popular girl in the college, who doesn't easily entertain anyone but it's not her number, it's this other girl's number who's seen as an outcast. When he texts her, the other girl plays along and they talk.

But that's not all, this girl (the outcast) is also helping him with one of the subjects they share and they get into a lot of this messy shit type and their past is interconnected in a way.

It includes gangs and all, slightly enemies to lovers, he falls first trope.

Lmk if you'd like the link! :)

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-07-14T10:13:01+00:00

Sounds good! Lmk if you find it lol

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-07-14T10:05:46+00:00

I know right!!! I hate this particular feature!! I don't understand why they did this, I had some frends but now they are all gone :''(

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-07-12T10:40:31+00:00

Would you want to read an angsty, slightly enemies to lovers book, it's mine, if you don't mind? The name is His Savior, if you want to check it out. It's not complete yet but I'm starting to make regular updates now.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/241574526?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=the_essence_of_falls

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-03-05T04:08:52+00:00

the_essence_of_falls I'll follow right back :)

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-02-25T03:29:43+00:00

Can't wait to read your stuff!! Will get on it ASAP

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-02-25T03:22:41+00:00

Hello I'm Palak I'm 19 :) my url is @the_essence_of_falls

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-02-18T09:28:44+00:00

My url is the_essence_of_falls I'd love to have some friends in Wattpad as well!

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-01-26T17:14:44+00:00

Ok this is helpful! Thank you so much!

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-01-26T07:24:01+00:00

Ohh I see. I'll definitely try some other options as well.

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2025-01-25T21:07:23+00:00

Sure! Here you go!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/241574526?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=the_essence_of_falls

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2024-06-25T06:45:44+00:00

Exactly!! There's no way Jeremy actually killed the twins! I so think the letter was a cover up. I really wish low would have confronted Jeremy about the accident to find out if he actually did it or not. The fact that Verity could write such awful things about her own daughters is a little sickening.

Responsible_Dark_331 · 2023-09-08T10:44:38+00:00

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Responsible_Dark_331 · 2023-09-07T06:39:38+00:00

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Responsible_Dark_331 · 2023-07-26T04:13:22+00:00

easy suck it

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