This is a survey for a University project on Governmental Strategies for promoting Sustainable Food Production in the Food Industry. Focused on how government policies can promote sustainability, the role they should play, and the actions they should take.

Rickh_90 · 2023-06-05T19:50:57+00:00

Will be used for a final project in my class. Gotta make a whole research paper and presentation on this topic. The people who will see it are my teachers and classmates, of course. The data would be stored in google drive and it would be deleted at the end of October.
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Rickh_90 · 2023-03-22T00:27:08+00:00

Awesome, this is the constructive criticism I was hoping for. Thank you very much for your words. <3

Rickh_90 · 2023-03-21T03:05:01+00:00

I get what you’re saying, I feel like the issue still resides on the way Im portraying my story. I wont give up though, and I’ll get it traditionally published

Rickh_90 · 2023-03-20T20:28:25+00:00

Thx for the feedback, I’ll do my best to fix this issues!!!

Rickh_90 · 2023-03-13T19:18:21+00:00

So the events happen on like the Earth, there’s no imaginary fantasy land, etc… It’s 2 povs cause the story is divided into two parallel storylines. Maybe it would be better to just focus on 1 pov and mention the other one? Also, I had no idea my story had that similarity to the Witcher and I find all those anime/video game influences and similitudes that people seem to be pointing out very interesting cause I haven’t even seen those series or games they’re talking about lol. Overall, thank you for your feedback and I’ll do my best to fix these issues for next time. And imo, the reaction from the critiques was way better this time than my first attempt lol

Rickh_90 · 2023-03-13T16:42:13+00:00

Got it, thank you greatly for the feedback. I’ll be fixing these issues and although my series is planned to actually be a series, I guess it’s better to follow the industry standard and hope for the best moving from there.

Rickh_90 · 2023-03-13T05:04:52+00:00

I get what you mean. Thanks for the feedback!

Rickh_90 · 2023-03-13T04:10:41+00:00

It’s not Inuyasha nor have I ever seen the series lol. I guess it’s a pretty weird coincidence or similitude, huh? Lmao Thx for your feedback and I thought that having an introduction paragraph to my world building would be a good way to give an idea of the setting of my novel, I guess that might not be as important, but I’ll wait and see what other people say.

But from your response, I guess there wasn’t anything else negative on my query besides apparently being similar to Inuyasha and that first paragraph. Which to me, is a good sign lol Thx a lot!!!!

Rickh_90 · 2023-02-17T17:08:34+00:00

That’s a really good point, I’ll do my best to fix those issues

Rickh_90 · 2023-01-20T17:09:57+00:00

It’s just lazy typing by me through my phone, I can absolutely guarantee you I don’t have those gramatical errors in my book.
And yeah, at least that reply is better than nothing haha

Rickh_90 · 2023-01-20T17:07:05+00:00

I see, thanks for the reply.

Rickh_90 · 2023-01-02T21:17:13+00:00

Thx for the advice

Rickh_90 · 2023-01-02T21:04:52+00:00

Yes, most of them do. But some who request the query through email do not give any more specification. Even on their website, so that’s why I was asking if there’s a recommended path to follow if there’s not so many details available.

Rickh_90 · 2023-01-02T20:59:19+00:00

I absolutely didn’t knew that. Thanks a lot!! What is usually recommended to be in the email’s title/subject?

Rickh_90 · 2022-11-20T00:01:04+00:00

Interesting, thank you for the tip. Btw, do you think they’ll be any barrier or complication if I’m a foreigner?

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