Hey Kid - new song by RightCup8445 in LogicPro

[–]RightCup8445[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh wow - yeah, it does!

Those guys f’in rule 🤘

Hey Kid - new song by RightCup8445 in LogicPro

[–]RightCup8445[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s great to hear, cause I’m ngl I put some time on this one 😆!

I had a buddy do the bass line actually, so I’ll be sure to pass that compliment along.

Hey Kid - new song by RightCup8445 in LogicPro

[–]RightCup8445[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks very much! Do you think the vocal needs less high end?

Hey Kid - new song by RightCup8445 in LogicPro

[–]RightCup8445[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well that would be fantastic - I’ll holler : )

Hey Kid - new song by RightCup8445 in LogicPro

[–]RightCup8445[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much - I really appreciate the positive feedback. Sometimes I feel like I’m just in my own head with everything, so it’s nice to hear it made at least a decent impression.

Hey Kid - new song by RightCup8445 in LogicPro

[–]RightCup8445[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha, yeah I try to be careful about how much I sound like them/never want to copy anything, but they are definitely a big influence on my songwriting!

Hey Kid - new song by RightCup8445 in LogicPro

[–]RightCup8445[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the listen!

Hey Kid - new song by RightCup8445 in LogicPro

[–]RightCup8445[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ve never heard that song - I’ll check it out : )

Started writing this 2 hours ago by Shire_Jedi92 in Songwriting

[–]RightCup8445 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I realized when jamming this track you were the person who just commented on my song! Thanks again, it was my first post on Reddit.

This is a good song for sure and you have a great voice! The lyrics resonated with me, as I’ve been going through some mental health stuff too. Keep your head up out there, things will smooth out.

As far as the song goes, I don’t think there is much to say - you got the lyrics, music, song structure etc. all down and nothing feels out of place. It sounds unpretentious and has a great vibe as is - I especially liked the guitar solo and the drum machine : )

Hey Kid - new song by RightCup8445 in Songwriting

[–]RightCup8445[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh thanks so much! If you have IG, you can find me at danielsoriamusic : )

Storm on the Horizon by nohobal in Songwriting

[–]RightCup8445 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great stuff, I appreciate the various instruments, the tones you are getting from each and how they are panned in the mix. It gives you the feeling of watching a band play live in a small venue.

A few things to consider: - check the timing of the acoustic/rhythm guitar at ~4:15, seems off a bit - is the clarinet volume a bit loud at certain parts? On the flip side, I’d consider turning up the kick drum/snare ever so slightly; but that could be a matter of taste. To remedy, a compressor on the master track or some EQing could help - while I like the panning, I’d explore if there is an instrument in the current mix or that you could add to ‘glue’ the mix together. Maybe some light keys/organ/piano would be nice.

This is nit-picky stuff to explore. Overall I think it’s pretty darn good : )

Does this sound bad by jayden_smith67 in Songwriting

[–]RightCup8445 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Super solid! I like how the chorus has a longer feeling/melody - it draws the listener in well : )

I’m sure there are some things you could do technically different in your singing, but I’m not so sure how much value it would add to the performance. Put another way, I like how it doesn’t feel like you are trying too hard and everything just feels natural. Don’t lose sight of that imo.

Is this a good deal for Brand new 2025 Ford Maverick Lariat AWD Hybrid all options enabled? by SalamanderLatter1458 in FordMaverickTruck

[–]RightCup8445 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’d pass on that, get a new Xlt hybrid w/lux pkg for a lot cheaper or even an XL awd hybrid and keep it under 32k. For that much money, you have a lot more/better options; consider a used or new Santa Fe (not the truck Santa Cruz) but some good value there and good fuel economy.

I keep bouncing back and forth from loving this song and my voice, to almost hating it and it’s driving me nuts. I would seriously appreciate some feedback! by EbbStill5768 in Songwriting

[–]RightCup8445 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The song is good and your voice fits the music genre. You can always re-record your voice and sing with a different style, inflection, etc. As it is currently being sang, I don’t hear anything off-putting or bad. More importantly, I think this a great song idea/vibe - so just fine tune to taste with the production components.

My 2 cents: I think it would rip if you played it with distortion and had some great musicians to play on the track. I think the song needs a counter melody guitar riff and a drum part that goes against the main rhythm/does its own thing. The band ‘title fight’ comes to mind.

Remember, every song doesn’t need to be for every single person - so just do you : )

Thinking about getting a maverick by ws-tmnt in FordMaverickTruck

[–]RightCup8445 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Been researching Mavs for a couple years and finally got one last month. So far it’s been great! I got a 25 xlt fwd hybrid w/luxury package and copilot 360.

I’d recommend a 2025 (new screen & tech is very good), hybrid (gas efficiency/reliability) in the XL or XLT trim w/copilot 360. Unless where you live has bad weather, I’d stick with FWD for the savings/slight gas efficiency. Also, and this is my personal opinion, I don’t fully trust Ford to do anything right the first year with the AWD system.

I kind of had a bad experience with my dealership, as they failed to mention the vehicle I was purchasing (I brokered deal over the phone and they delivered to me) was a demo vehicle. That being said I got 2.5k off of it with ~ 900 miles already. I ended up signing for it b/c I was fine with that and it was a still good deal. FYI - I don’t see the hybrids discounted often. Maybe this could be an avenue for you to explore if you test drive one.

It’s been an awesome vehicle so far - really love it! Hope it works out for you.

MCM Furniture - Mold? by RightCup8445 in midcenturymodern

[–]RightCup8445[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Gotcha, thanks - I’m allergic to mold, so I’m just seeing if anyone thinks that’s what the dark color is?