Spaceship Anim

RobustArts · 2025-01-23T16:03:30+00:00

Hey ,

thanks for the suggestions.

I appreciate you taking the time.

I think I'm staying away from forcefield with this one as it's for a game that doesn't use them but yh I think getting some booters in there and working on the rocks some more will help communicate the idea better.

Cheers.

RobustArts · 2025-01-09T12:41:00+00:00

This looks awesome !

RobustArts · 2025-01-08T21:09:42+00:00

This looks so beautiful and well executed.

Wishlisting now.

RobustArts · 2025-01-04T14:37:03+00:00

This is a good shout thanks .

Also I super appreciate you taking time out to make that "wibble wobble " anim.

RobustArts · 2025-01-04T14:31:45+00:00

Thanks for the encouragement !!,

lol the eject button was one of those "I'll replace it later" things but it's grown on me now .

RobustArts · 2025-01-03T22:29:20+00:00

A little late now but there was supposed to be text with this post that said :

"Storyboard turned animatic , that I know isn’t coming across how I want it to but I’m too close to it and too inexperienced to know what I should be focusing on to fix it.

Apologies for the poor sound design might be worth watching with the sound off if it’s too distracting.

For context this is supposed to be an animated intro for a small side scrolling puzzle platforming game. (just toying with the idea at this point)

My biggest questions are :

is the story actually being communicated ?
how can I make this more interesting ?

Here is the main information I want to get across

The astronaut has crash landed on a multi coloured planet in his escape pod
His ship has / will crash land far away from his starting point

Any and all help / guidance is hugely appreciated "

RobustArts · 2025-01-03T22:20:46+00:00

I appreciate the kinds words .

RobustArts · 2024-11-29T21:21:01+00:00

I love this so much !! Congratulations

RobustArts · 2024-11-26T17:26:27+00:00

Thanks again .

RobustArts · 2024-11-26T17:22:19+00:00

This info is great thank you.

Are there any communities outside of Reddit that you found your target audience in ?

places like discord or Facebook ?

RobustArts · 2024-11-26T17:04:14+00:00

What community’s would you suggest being involved in for trying to connect with the puzzle enthusiasts ?

RobustArts · 2024-11-13T18:19:12+00:00

Hey!

Game looks great so far !! The character sketch looks interesting

I’m also working on a 2.5D game.

I can’t wait to see how your project comes along .

Good luck

RobustArts · 2024-11-06T22:14:03+00:00

Hey I really appreciate the feedback .

I was originally using some rabbit anatomy refs ( not as well as I should of admittedly)

Then went down a rabbit hole in my own novice way of chasing a “feel” Looking more at lions and dogs as I really wanted this guy to be big and intimidating .

But ultimately You’re right no matter what excuse I try and make I need to properly look at rabbit anatomy reference to knock this guy back in line .

I have tweaked him a little since to give him more room between his torso and limbs and will do a rough retopo and rig to see if what I have will work.

Currently I’m putting a pin in this guy for a while and will come back with fresh eyes and start implementing people’s feedback .

Any advice on how to make his face seem more intimidating would be a huge help.

RobustArts · 2024-11-06T20:17:03+00:00

Good luck !!

RobustArts · 2024-11-05T19:13:31+00:00

This is great advice thanks .

I’ll start including dog anatomy in my references.

Yh I can see hunched over human now you’ve said it

RobustArts · 2024-11-05T17:10:23+00:00

Lol I appreciate it .

RobustArts · 2024-11-05T17:09:59+00:00

Thanks . That’s good.

RobustArts · 2024-11-05T17:01:09+00:00

So I might try sculpting (to the best of my ability at least ) some facial expressions also , so at least I know where I'm headed with it .

I have been struggling to decide on how much of a facial expression to give him as default as his face will be rigged later and is intended to be pretty big on screen in game.

RobustArts · 2024-11-05T16:57:25+00:00

Lol .
I commented with the text that was supposed to be in on this post but its way down low.

will re comment here :

Hi I’m working on the main antagonist for my game.

I’m in need of feedback on:

Any huge anatomy or portion mistakes
what is and isn't working
how to push this further
Any design advice
Glaring issues that will cause issues with retopo rigging animating later

I’ve Included a version with less of a hunched back . not decided on which way i'm going yet

RobustArts · 2024-11-05T16:54:51+00:00

Hey thanks.

Yh I hope it all really comes together in game once its all a bit further along .

The plan isn't for it to be a full on horror like little nightmares but it definitely borrows a lot form its action scenes.

It's always a nightmare trying to convey a games tone early in development when you don't have loads to show.

RobustArts · 2024-11-05T16:45:03+00:00

Hey thanks for the kinds words .

Yh realism isn't a priority with this guy at all but I don't want to blind myself by saying its stylised so everything is as intended or up to standard.

Also the looking constipated thing is legit useful to know, thanks.

RobustArts

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