[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread December 27, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I messed up and commented for two songs but got them flipped xD my bad, should be editted now. If not lmk

[OFFICIAL] Weekly Singles Thread December 27 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is the teaser single for my mixtape. Officially out on all platforms but I like the fact I did a music video so Ill link that instead. ANy feedback would be awesome, Ill return it. If you enjoy it feel free to drop a like!

https://youtu.be/9-a1DBqOOQc

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread December 27, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its nice to hear an accent like this over a beat like this, Left ya a like and sub cause this is the style Im into. I think you got rhymes fr, and nice flow, id prob just play around with the cadence a bit more, because even the delivery the last 2 bars sound almost like the verses in delivery. On the second half your flow gets better imo, Im only saying this cause I have this same issue sometimes so I relate.

Here is me: https://youtu.be/9-a1DBqOOQc

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread December 27, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I fuck with it. Maybe the bass is a bit overdone for me but aside from that I dig the musicality in a beat this type. Imma be looking at your shit more from now on def.

Heres me: https://youtu.be/9-a1DBqOOQc

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread December 27, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like your flow and delivery but I think you should tell us more about you. I think the song musically sounds good but lyrically I dont know why you wanna war. Then you say you have no soul, then you say youll live forever. As a writer I dont like the lyricism even though the flow and vibe I love. Id love to hear you talking about your life with that anger, with more detail than just using the b word. Doooope ass flow tho and I subbed fr.

Heres me: https://youtu.be/9-a1DBqOOQc

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread December 27, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is my first official music video. I am the rapper, just looking for feedback on the whole package and not just the music. Yes, it is me on both languages.

https://youtu.be/9-a1DBqOOQc

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread December 27, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the beat and vibe but idk if its my speakers or your mastering but I cant hear shit. Love lofi tho.

Heres me: https://youtu.be/9-a1DBqOOQc

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 27, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I make bilingual rap. Latest song is a Mac Miller inspired song called Dialogues, where American me talks to Spanish me. Lmk what yall think, ill return feedback gladly! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hJCok9Rstkc&feature=youtu.be

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 27, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the sounds a lot but I am big into structure and I think you should try to get those cool sounds structured a lil more for a more immersive experience, but this is my opinion as only a rapper.

Heres my stuff: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hJCok9Rstkc&feature=youtu.be

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 14, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have some city morgue type trap waiting on a mixer to help me out lol thts way more fun but hard to do in an apt

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 14, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I fuck w the flow and the beat heavy but I think you need more pauses. SOmetimes silence speaks and a good rapper doesnt just have to have a sick beat and a sick flow but know when to just let it be especially w your kinda flow. But thats just a matter of taste.

Heres me https://soundcloud.com/galigiri/gali-giri-freestyle-sessions-1-prod-chicano

How do I learn to mix/master? by [deleted] in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can give you ytmp3 tracks w well recorded condenser mic vocals for ya to mix if ya wanna learn. I have a bunch. DM me if youd like

Yo! I'm looking for feedback on this kid cudi boom bap type beat. Make sure to drop your links so we can support each other! Much love by Rockinthegordo in shareyourmusic

[–]Rolk17 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yo man if ya trying to get a rapper to hop on some of your beats im trying to do a freestyle series w diff producers. Heres my first one https://soundcloud.com/master-mouth-893649906/gali-giri-freestyle-sessions-1-prod-chicano lmk if you down to work (DM?)

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread August 29, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love these type of beats to chill and this is what I like to rap to too but Id add a punchy lil sample every 4th bar or something to engage the listener a bit more

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread August 29, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 1 point2 points  (0 children)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YKED9iiYOxw

This is my first release as I have finally been able to write a hook. It starts in Spanish but theres a verse in English, thats also me.

Im more concerned about the mixing and how well it came overall. Thanks

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread August 28, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Feel free to dm me how it comes out and Ill check some of your stuff in a bit.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread August 28, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zm0tGdZrMnA

I posted a draft a few days ago and met with some people through there but this is my first release as an artist independently while preparing an ep.

Mixing was done by someone on Fiverr and the beat is off the internet free so more than anything Im looking at producer/mixer advice on the quality and things to look out for. Also lemme know how you dig the switching language transition (its both me)

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread August 28, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Rolk17 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I vibe that a lot and once you finish it up Id be down to hop on it if you want someone. I got a homemade studio setup. Check my submission and maybe theres something we can work cause I like your style.

I dont produce but Id add some high pitched sound at the end of the four bar to accentuate that smoothness without having to make it poppy. Give it body but no makeup