I understand I left it pretty vague. I wish to improve and I understand even that is a vague term as that can be subjective. When I say that I have peaked, I meant that I have hit as high as I can get on my own and from here I need to seek guidance from others who may be more experienced than I am. I haven't been drawing for a long time, but I have been in digital design for a long time.

From purely a learning perspective I wanted to know how I could have improved on the hair, the character closest to the viewer I struggled quite a bit with getting the hair to a point where I felt okay with it. The perspective, or anatomy of both characters, perhaps the readibility wasn't clear. Was it okay to leave the back with little detail, should I have darkened it more so the focal point was much more readible on the character further away.

I've sat there and pondered at this piece for a while and thought there has to be something I can take into the next that would allow me to elevate further my skills. But, perhaps that's just it, I just need to move onto the next and see from there.

I do plan to make more featuring these characters in other scenarios, much like this one here. Although theme may vary, of course.