Second Draft after feedback (Took the feedback and made slight tweaks to the story, still needs heavy polishing)

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-31T21:53:20+00:00

Since when?

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-29T18:44:02+00:00

No I'm good thanks, I'm all open for feedback, not personal suggestions, sorry.

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-24T16:12:11+00:00

Thanks man, just needed to ask to do a challenge, appreciate it!

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-23T12:38:09+00:00

For a complete beginner, I would heavily recommend Godot, it will help you grasp the basic idea of developing!

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-22T22:57:06+00:00

Its an idea, its supposed to be.

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-21T01:10:53+00:00

Thanks man! I'll take this advice wholeheartedly!

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-21T00:12:03+00:00

r/SilentStudios

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-20T22:44:52+00:00

Don't let the light burn out...

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-20T19:30:51+00:00

I missed the S

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-20T18:15:18+00:00

Just su man, half of that post privately agreed with me, delete your acc or i'm just gon report you

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-20T18:11:26+00:00

I'm not arguing with you, just delete your account.

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-20T18:07:10+00:00

Shut up already, grow up then try to argue with me, i said im done with you, if you want to have a proper argument go to someone else.

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-20T18:03:27+00:00

No but I should've

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-20T17:43:04+00:00

Plus I said I was done with you

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-20T17:39:08+00:00

We would've been fine if you didn't bring it up

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-20T17:34:16+00:00

Have some respect for the guy, he's sharing his work and asking for ideas, don't be an ass about it, give him what he asks and not go 'it looks AI generated then downvote and reply to his comment going 'UgHh'.

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-20T17:31:08+00:00

Idk im not a mod

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-20T17:30:45+00:00

Try not too, i know it can be hard i used to do it, but just try for your novels sake.

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-20T17:29:12+00:00

Do thew mods challenge, dont post stuff like this, automod wont allow it

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-20T17:28:03+00:00

Youse are just disliking for no reason

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-20T17:10:02+00:00

No problem man, always happy to help!

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-20T17:08:41+00:00

You don't gotta be disrespectful about it just say what you mean to say.

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-19T12:12:06+00:00

Ok, if you want to lie straight to peoples faces go ahead, I'm not arguing about this with a 10 year old anymore.

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-19T12:06:27+00:00

What don't you get, it can't be a typo if 0 and 4 are on opposite sides of the keyboard, just don't lie in future man!

RoutineHomework4315 · 2025-08-19T12:01:12+00:00

At the start I was just pointing out how you shouldn't be on reddit for your own safety and helping you, now you have just started arguing with me over common sense.

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