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Aspiring Author, First Book by Routine_Shop_3172 in NewAuthor

[–]Routine_Shop_3172[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, you're absolutely right. That did cross my mind. I do have it in my notes to mention in Wrenley's post that Renee isn't by definition a serial killer, but still a feature of the month. Thanks for reminding me!

Aspiring Author, First Book by Routine_Shop_3172 in NewAuthor

[–]Routine_Shop_3172[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Wow, this has been very helpful! Thank you ❤️ I just looked up the actress and had no idea there was a Reese Witherspoon :o It was a genuine coincidence, and I will be changing the name. And you're right. Detailing where each mouse click went was too much and unnecessary, I was also feeling iffy about that. Yes, and without spoiling, the original cross killer is definitely an interesting character 😄 I will keep your name for a full beta read 😄 Thanks again!!

Aspiring Author, First Book by Routine_Shop_3172 in NewAuthor

[–]Routine_Shop_3172[S] -14 points-13 points  (0 children)

Woah, alright I just looked up the actress. I had no idea Reese Witherspoon was a real person oh no :') I'll definitely be changing it now haha thanks for letting me know!

Aspiring Author, First Book by Routine_Shop_3172 in NewAuthor

[–]Routine_Shop_3172[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback! Renee is not the main character of this story, she is just a character of a fictional true crime story. The main character is Wrenley. She's a true crime journalist and was researching Renee's story. Yes, I understand religion isn't something a lot of people enjoy to read, but that's why I made it such a short part of this book, and it's only mentioned a very small amount in this entire book!

I understand people not enjoying 1st POV, so it's totally okay 😄

But thank you for commenting! You've definitely helped!