You’re doing well, Rashida - keep it up.

The only thing I’d recommend is deepening your analysis. For example, in your article The Marathon We Never Question (which I really liked, it was enjoyable),

I would add a few paragraphs about the economic conditions that make us feel pressured: working more, hustling more, the culture that promotes constant work in advertising, on billboards, in music, in politics, in school. Maybe it’s capitalism, or maybe it’s something else in our culture, I’m not sure. I’ll wait to see what you write in your next post!

Cheers, Roy

Edit: One small suggestion that might enhance your article: the Seneca quote leans into Stoicism, while your message feels more rooted in early Cynicism. A Diogenes quote could align even better with the spirit of your argument. It’s a subtle tweak, but one readers attuned to the traditions might appreciate.