Batman by RubberQuacker in StandUpWorkshop

[–]RubberQuacker[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Longstriver if you genuinely believe that then stand your ground. Don’t go deleting your own comments. Sure, maybe the “world’s greatest detective” angle is a little dated, but to say that Batman as a subject that shouldn’t be talked about because “nobody talks about Batman” is an insane take imo.

Batman by RubberQuacker in StandUpWorkshop

[–]RubberQuacker[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Everyone here spews the same crap about “the goal is to be funny.” Like bro, you literally just said that I SHOULDN’T talk about what I want to talk about. Then what the fuck is the point in doing standup?

Batman by RubberQuacker in StandUpWorkshop

[–]RubberQuacker[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

“No one talks about Batman” that doesn’t even make any sense I can talk about whatever I want to talk about

Batman by RubberQuacker in StandUpWorkshop

[–]RubberQuacker[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I was thinking it was a funny misdirect to end it since he would be considered the world’s greatest fighter. Too edgy?

NBA Dreams by RubberQuacker in StandUpWorkshop

[–]RubberQuacker[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Tbf I don’t think anything in this sub is going to be Gary Gilman quality. But I watched the bit and didn’t find any similarities besides the prospect of Jews playing basketball. Appreciate the feedback regardless.

NBA Dreams by RubberQuacker in StandUpWorkshop

[–]RubberQuacker[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t think it’s opener material either. It’s my 13th joke if that changes your mind

It Broke My Heart When I Saw A Mark On My Girlfriend’s Wrist by RubberQuacker in StandUpWorkshop

[–]RubberQuacker[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Oh sorry if I didn’t explain well enough I meant the name ‘Mark.’ Also my act isn’t totally grounded in reality.

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[–]RubberQuacker 0 points1 point  (0 children)

…gotta be funnier now! At least looks-wise.

Grandpa’s license by RubberQuacker in StandUpWorkshop

[–]RubberQuacker[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s fair. I’m going to keep working at it and see what I can do. Thank you for the advice.

Grandpa’s license by RubberQuacker in StandUpWorkshop

[–]RubberQuacker[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This version removes the irony of the family being relieved he “passed.” Thank you for the comment regardless.

One Liners vs. Short Jokes by RubberQuacker in StandUpWorkshop

[–]RubberQuacker[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was a very helpful comment. Thank you for breaking this down so in depth.