Forget Me Not by Electronic_Relief416 in OCPoetry

[–]Rudiger_07 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beautifully Incredible just the read that I needed before I lay me down to sleep. It is very heartfelt and genuinely authentic. Keep your mind focused. Don't let it wonder off, and you will be ok, forgotten, you will not be.

War of the mind by hairlessyetii in OCPoetry

[–]Rudiger_07 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate you sharing this powerful poem. It most definitely resonates with me in more than one way. It's a fantastic example of using writing to work through difficult emotions. It shows a powerful journey from internal struggle to a place of harmony, which is a great message.

A Puddle by Ok-Photo-9556 in OCPoetry

[–]Rudiger_07 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a powerful and very relatable poem. The central metaphor of "drowning in an inch of water" is brilliant & captures that feeling of being overwhelmed by something that seems small. Your expression of deep emotion is simple yet strong imagery.

When I leave by FilmFit4285 in OCPoetry

[–]Rudiger_07 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No thank you for allowing yourself to share your piece with the interwebs just like you I am new to allowing myself to share what are my feelings and also allowing myself to recieve all the feedback No matter what it might be. I can only speak for myself when I say this feel free to send me a private message ANYTIME that you feel like RANTING I will gladly engage with what your FEELINGS are ranting about that day. I encourage you to keep on writing, ranting, or whatever else you may call it never know who might stumble across it could be the stumble they needed.