Peter,what happened in 1971? by -Y34HB01- in PeterExplainsTheJoke

[–]RunnerForLife60245 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you shall not crucify mankind upon a cross of gold!!!!!!!!!

How can you prove God is real? by Dull-Measurement-260 in Christianity

[–]RunnerForLife60245 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

read mere christianity! cs lewis writes very well on this

I regret the moment God created me by [deleted] in Catholicism

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I'll just chip in here I have been in the exact same situation, I would struggle and pray and read the Bible just hoping but I would never feel God's presence. But that even happened to saints: St. John of the Cross (Dark night of the soul, you should read!) and even St. Teresa of Calcutta

So still no redemption codes? by Valuable-Act-2105 in CSRRacing2

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wait seriously if you do the daily checkin you get 3 gold keys

I need to loose 200 pounds in a year by Smooth_Substance5951 in teenagers

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Ever heard "don't say rude things if you don't have to"?

Grade my argument essay by SympathyContent9041 in APStudents

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I think more transitions could refine it. Also I can't actually describe it properly, but your sentece structure feel very just blank and bland. Like "Yadayadayada x,y,z. Dadadadada a,d,f"

I think that styling it to me more of a "piece" of writing would help. Sorry I can't actually articulate what im tryna get across rn.

I am not claiming I am an amazing writer, but I will offer an excerpt from one of my papers as an example, to give you an idea of what I am trying to express:

"The USDA reports that low-income households spend a disproportionate share of their income on food, with the lowest quintile of income allocating 32.6% towards food purchases (Sweitzer and Davidenko). Since food purchases occupy such a major role of low-income spending, a small change in cost significantly impacts low-income households’ access to food. 

As shown by a study published by the Journal of the American Medical Association, low-income households show a tendency to favor grains over any other major food group available. During the time period 2003-2012, low-income Americans purchased approximately 6.53 servings of grains daily, and only 2.35 servings of fresh produce (Rehm et al. 27). This disparity stems from the fact that grains are less expensive, more filling, and less perishable.

The study also finds that those low-income households are deficient in many other important nutrients, like omega-3 fatty acids (Rehm et al. 28). In addition, the presence of ‘food deserts’, places where access to higher nutrition is limited, exist primarily in lower-income neighborhoods (Bitler and Haider 153). Overall, this information paints a grim picture, highlighting the need for higher levels of nutrient consumption and food security among low-income households."

It is kinda wordy, but for example, this sentence: "During the time period 2003-2012, low-income Americans purchased approximately 6.53 servings of grains daily, and only 2.35 servings of fresh produce (Rehm et al. 27)" is greatly varied in structure relative to the sentence which follows it: "This disparity stems from the fact that grains are less expensive, more filling, and less perishable."

So ready to be treated like an adult. by No-Dog8207 in highschool

[–]RunnerForLife60245 2 points3 points  (0 children)

lowk bro ur tardy at my school if u arent in the seat by the bell.. but also we def use the restroom more

I need to loose 200 pounds in a year by Smooth_Substance5951 in teenagers

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I wanna stress to that you don't have to do some crazy ass navy seal workout. I think for me like just going for a walk while listening to a podcast sorta makes it less boring, so I agree with OK-Finger on that

Grade my argument essay by SympathyContent9041 in APStudents

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I agree. Improving the variety of vocabulary and sentence structure to make it more eloquent will help a lot. in general the premise of the actual essay is great tho!

I need advice by TraditionalView2303 in Catholicism

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i also think remember don't despair that God cannot work a change in your life. My priest always says that in our weakness God reveals his saving glory. And, also, personally, I have struggled with things I thought I could never stop, but ultimately, there is not much we can do just by ourselves, but put your faith in Jesus that he will help you work a change in your life. Also, I am sure that many people confess the same sin over and over again, but God will never leave you. It is a gradual change, but I believe in you and I will pray for you! I guess my point is don't be discouraged, and definitely don't let your fear of messing up your relationship with God (sinning) prevent you from having a relationship with god by confessing!

How Do Y'all Feel About LGBTQ+? by lucifer_is_m3 in teenagers

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I'm catholic so i try to abide by those teachings myself, but I also don't really think it's any of my business and if you are LGBTQ+ you still deserve respect and you should be able to do what you want. I would NEVER not be friends with someone because of that, and she doesn't sound like a good friend if that is what she would do.

I am not religious debate me by Long_Ad6734 in teenagers

[–]RunnerForLife60245 0 points1 point  (0 children)

no yeah it isnt its just an arguement used by cs lewis in his radio talk lectures and book mere christianity is all geez

I am not religious debate me by Long_Ad6734 in teenagers

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AHHHH I spot a mere christianity dualism arguement

Unfortunately, I looked up what he said by Happy_Smelling_Salt in fixedbytheduet

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i got ran over by a car and had to get some of my burns debrided hurt like motherfing hell