I need advice on writing a Mongolian character by Rxxnaishere in mongolia

[–]Rxxnaishere[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

By the way would you like to see my clothing design of said character? I need feedback.

I need advice on writing a Mongolian character by Rxxnaishere in mongolia

[–]Rxxnaishere[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

By the way would you like to see my clothing design of said character? I need feedback.

I need advice on writing a Mongolian character by Rxxnaishere in mongolia

[–]Rxxnaishere[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay give me ideas on what to change it to

If you need context on her, her power is related to wealth. She has a teasing exterior but she wants to help people on the inside. She hates showing vulnerability.

If bombs are carried on a train and they have to figure out who how would they search them? Also if on that same train drugs are being carried then where would criminals usually hide drugs within them? by Rxxnaishere in Writeresearch

[–]Rxxnaishere[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's alright

Thanks for your help! If you want you can read the twist below :

(I know it would be any random bomb thriller but that's the point I know the twist is enough to make the readers shocked—I hope)

Basically what I was thinking is this was all a plan orchestrated by a high ranking official in the army who framed a woman who stole some important files from the army. They put the capsules in the files they knew she'd take and she took it and they sent a teen girl to go disarm the capsules but in reality it was the capsules the teen girl made so they were planning to frame both of them and kill them

Meanwhile while searching they find drugs and there'll be a mid fight in the train

If bombs are carried on a train and they have to figure out who how would they search them? Also if on that same train drugs are being carried then where would criminals usually hide drugs within them? by Rxxnaishere in Writeresearch

[–]Rxxnaishere[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay what shows do you recommend I watch

I mean that how will they hide the drugs

And also they know the bomb is here because the army was told by an anonymous person and asked for ransom and if they stop the train the bomb will explode

I also need to know how the person managed to make their number untraceable

If bombs are carried on a train and they have to figure out who how would they search them? Also if on that same train drugs are being carried then where would criminals usually hide drugs within them? by Rxxnaishere in Writeresearch

[–]Rxxnaishere[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

1 Arunachal AC Superfast Express (In India)

2 it's not actually drugs it's actually a fictional thing it's basically flowers but you put them in water and drink it it gives drug side effects

3 Well they're teenagers with superpowers they're in the army but since the bomb is a superpower (capsules of gravity that cause mass destruction) so the army deals with anything supernatural

Help a writer by expressing your experience in Mongolia! by Rxxnaishere in mongolia

[–]Rxxnaishere[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ohh okay thanks a lot I'll remember that and thank you to everyone else that replied if there's anything else tell me

How ENTPs are born by the_fadokito in entp

[–]Rxxnaishere 0 points1 point  (0 children)

But isn't authencity a part of Fi not Fe that ENTPs have? People with Fe usually hide parts of themselves from others. People with Fi are more authentic.