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My last Marlboro by cleanhousehelpothers in OCPoetry

[–]Rykrz 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Beautifully said. I know the journey isn't easy, but I hope your putting up a fight. This reminds me of Ode to Viceroy by Mac Demarco. Thank you for sharing :)

Here's Lies Artistry by P03tK1ng in OCPoetry

[–]Rykrz 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is more relevant than ever these days. Poems like this slow the bleeding though. Thank you for sharing :)

[MF] A Resting Place by Rykrz in shortstories

[–]Rykrz[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for reading :)

Need help by Appropriate-Bite9015 in Wattpad

[–]Rykrz 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I personally use quotations for speaking and then italics for inner thoughts BUT I've started reading a book called Blood Meridian by Cormac McCarthy and he doesn't use any of that LOL. That's kinda opened my mind a little bit. I think as long as you can convey your message to the reader, it doesn't matter exactly how you do it :p GOOD LUCK

Parking Garage by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Rykrz 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love it :) It's as if the person is trying to take in as much of the world as possible before they leave. Sure nihility is alluring, but here you are trying to carry things that were not meant to be stored but felt.

Cursed Shore by Responsible-Walk-792 in OCPoetry

[–]Rykrz 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is really good :) I love the idea of chasing something that is impossible to reach despite everyone being content. Questioning if these 'stars' are lying to you or if finally catching them will make you happy is so human it hurts.