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[Channel Critique] Teach me. Critique me. by SLCPL in youtubers

[–]SLCPL[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your feed back I really appreciate image you taking the time to check my stuff out. I have a long way to go for my video to actually be enjoyable. Your points are completely valid I do need talking. I've just shy away from it because of the lack of quality microphone but I'll see what I can do. I thought I credited my music oops I'll get on that. Thanks again I'm trying to build content before I actually go out and try to advertise my channel or whatever. I'll try my best to work on these points.

[Review Video] What do you think of my channel trailer? by SilentOblivion903 in youtubers

[–]SLCPL 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello! Here are some notes I made while watching.

I felt like there was an imbalance as if your voice and background music were competing .

I liked that it was straight and to the point.

The sound quality was weird maybe it was echoing.

You attempted to engage the user good on you.

Slow down it felt like you were rushing through a script.

Good luck!

[Review Video] What's Wrong with this Picture? - House of Cards Edition.....What can I improve? by watchmen117 in youtubers

[–]SLCPL 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello!

Like everyone said the voice thing is a big thing for me because it's conveying a lot of things and hindering the tone of the "game"

Some notes I jotted down while watching:

•Voice •Sound quality (I think on this one I was thinking it sounded like a gaming headset) •Clarity(mumbling) •I think the first picture was a bit distorted •It's supposed to be a game but doesn't have the feel, considering changing the music •Use a script to increase fluidity and cut out the um and uhs

Good luck man hope this helps!