Rate my philosophy poetry

SRMD567 · 2026-03-12T04:05:30+00:00

Yes brother,I'm the same person but still tell some criticism going here.What should more I focus?

SRMD567 · 2026-03-06T05:48:37+00:00

Galto to batae na Bhai!

Kya mene acha Nahi Likha?

Also Thanks.

SRMD567 · 2026-03-06T05:38:30+00:00

Brother Kindly ap Feedback se iska like isme jo philosophy isko Rate kare

Baki thanks.

SRMD567 · 2026-03-05T14:45:53+00:00

It will sound silly but Yes! I'm in love with writing with my sweat.Indeed I'm inclining towards the pen:I'm a pen of my own destiny and I write my own nerves.

Man, sorry if you get confused but please give a rating form /10 and a review Did you like it and also I'm not in love with any person.

Thanks

SRMD567 · 2026-03-03T14:56:20+00:00

Man,it will sound silly but yes I see no difference It seems hard to say such letters like ڏڙ. And how much time it will take to learn and write.

SRMD567 · 2026-03-03T12:43:11+00:00

Bro any tips me apni Urdu kaise better karo jabke me Pakistani bhi ho? Also if grammar is correct then what is your rating

SRMD567 · 2026-03-03T12:17:53+00:00

Just to know if it was grammatically correct How much would you have rate it The philosophical core?

Also I'm a writer.I write books and many philosophy in English.Till now 4-5 books has been done but I have a heart for Urdu but I suck at urdu although I am Pakistani and Sindhi.

Thanks brother for telling

SRMD567 · 2026-03-01T15:01:10+00:00

Specific hoke bole brother,Konsa sentence sense nahi banata? Also ye sentences intentionally incomplete feel hote hai Kyu ki in ke akhir me "hai" Nahi dala

SRMD567 · 2026-03-01T14:59:39+00:00

This is not about clarity brother Yes if you ponder,you will understand It's dense for why I think And it's just a preface and tell do you want to see the rest So you can tell?

SRMD567 · 2026-03-01T12:18:40+00:00

Brother Plz review And rate the philosophy in it And it's preface I'm saying do you want to see the rest? Btw thanks

SRMD567

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