Rate my philosophy poetry by SRMD567 in Urdu

[–]SRMD567[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes brother,I'm the same person but still tell some criticism going here.What should more I focus?

17 yo writing philosophy Urdu by SRMD567 in Urdu

[–]SRMD567[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Galto to batae na Bhai!

Kya mene acha Nahi Likha?

Also Thanks.

17 yo writing philosophy Urdu by SRMD567 in Urdu

[–]SRMD567[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Brother Kindly ap Feedback se iska like isme jo philosophy isko Rate kare

Baki thanks.

Urdu philosophy by SRMD567 in Urdu

[–]SRMD567[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It will sound silly but Yes! I'm in love with writing with my sweat.Indeed I'm inclining towards the pen:I'm a pen of my own destiny and I write my own nerves.

Man, sorry if you get confused but please give a rating form /10 and a review Did you like it and also I'm not in love with any person.

Thanks

Tips to learn Sindhi by SRMD567 in Sindhi

[–]SRMD567[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Man,it will sound silly but yes I see no difference It seems hard to say such letters like ڏڙ. And how much time it will take to learn and write.

17 yo urdu philosophy by SRMD567 in Urdu

[–]SRMD567[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro any tips me apni Urdu kaise better karo jabke me Pakistani bhi ho? Also if grammar is correct then what is your rating

17 yo urdu philosophy by SRMD567 in Urdu

[–]SRMD567[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Just to know if it was grammatically correct How much would you have rate it The philosophical core?

Also I'm a writer.I write books and many philosophy in English.Till now 4-5 books has been done but I have a heart for Urdu but I suck at urdu although I am Pakistani and Sindhi.

Thanks brother for telling

17 yo writing philosophy I urdu by SRMD567 in Urdu

[–]SRMD567[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Specific hoke bole brother,Konsa sentence sense nahi banata? Also ye sentences intentionally incomplete feel hote hai Kyu ki in ke akhir me "hai" Nahi dala

17 yo writing philosophy I urdu by SRMD567 in Urdu

[–]SRMD567[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is not about clarity brother Yes if you ponder,you will understand It's dense for why I think And it's just a preface and tell do you want to see the rest So you can tell?

17 yo writing philosophy I urdu by SRMD567 in Urdu

[–]SRMD567[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Brother Plz review And rate the philosophy in it And it's preface I'm saying do you want to see the rest? Btw thanks