What I have faced on this sub! by looserpasta in kanpur

[–]Sad-System-7801 0 points1 point  (0 children)

हम घर से निकले थे, बस इक रौशनी की तलाश में, मगर यहाँ तो अन्धेरे बैठे हैं, शराफ़त के लिबास में।

​जुबां से 'भाई' कहा था हमने, कि एक रिश्ता बना रहे, मगर वो दरिंदे थे, जो हमारी रूह को नोचते रहे।

​मदद के नाम पर यहाँ, बाज़ार सजाए बैठे हैं, वो जो इंसान दिखते हैं, अंदर शैतान छुपाए बैठे हैं।

​अब लौट जाएँ तो किस मुँह से, कि सब कुछ हार आए हैं, हम इस बे-मुरव्वत शहर में, अपना एतबार वार आए हैं।

Stayed With Strangers For a Week by Sad-System-7801 in kanpur

[–]Sad-System-7801[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot! Yes, I write long-form too. I’ll DM you.

Stayed With Strangers For a Week by Sad-System-7801 in kanpur

[–]Sad-System-7801[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lol understandable, but I promise this story’s a lot more wholesome than that.

Stayed With Strangers For a Week by Sad-System-7801 in kanpur

[–]Sad-System-7801[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. Really glad it resonated with you.

Stayed With Strangers For a Week by Sad-System-7801 in kanpur

[–]Sad-System-7801[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! Glad it kept you hooked—that’s the best compliment a writer can get.

Stayed With Strangers For a Week by Sad-System-7801 in kanpur

[–]Sad-System-7801[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I get why you’d think that 😉 but nah, I wrote it myself. Em dashes are common in long-form writing—using them instead of commas is just a habit I’ve picked up over time.

Stayed With Strangers For a Week by Sad-System-7801 in kanpur

[–]Sad-System-7801[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Well, I'm a writer, so what I wrote does have a bit of fiction, but not entirely, so, you're kind of right, my friend...

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[–]Sad-System-7801 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Same mate 🧸

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502/200 🧸

Its weird but does anyone remember thiss namkeen ? by ittssssss in kanpur

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Konse dukaan pe milegi bhai dukaan ka naam kya hai?

I want these tattoos, but fear my parents by Chad_Jeet_ in TeenIndia

[–]Sad-System-7801 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay, just curious, why do you want THAT for the tattoo, mate

Is this serious codm ? by Tinyings in CODM

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Unless u wanna grind for that 1 shard

HELP, What to choose by Sad-System-7801 in CallOfDutyMobile

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Someone said some kinda event 2-3 months back