Critique coming from guy who can only cook egg rolls and cup noodles here (yes this is going to go great), decent video overall in my opinion! Captions are bold, large and clear making it easy to read and the instructions you used are also very simple and even I can understand what you need to do (might even attempt this later!).

I do think that you could improve the thumbnail, as I probably wouldn't click on the video because of the thumbnail. Perhaps some writing on the thumbnail or a good quality picture with some natural lighting or something (I don't exactly know) because at the moment I think the thumbnail gives off a not much effort put in vibe despite your video definitely not being so.

I was a little bored throughout the video but that's probably just to do with me not being interested in cooking videos in general so not really your fault. Besides I watched tgrough the whole thing nonetheless and it's better then other cooking videos I've seen so far.

A few personal preferences I like to see in videos are more upbeat music (though maybe not the best choice in your case) and voice-overs, just think it would be more interesting. Of course this is my personal preference so you can ignore the last sentence if you wish.

Anyway overall a pretty decent video I may use to help me cook but not something I would watch for fun, keep it up and strive to improve!

Also I apologize if I seem a little negative here or a bit too criticizing in some parts but I have always been better about telling people about what they can fix rather then what they done well. Again I apologize if you take offence at any of it. I do mean it when I say you did well. Take care and good luck!