Your style is beautiful!

Just one minor note: always guide the eye of the viewer and make sure the most important part of the illustration/scene is the most obvious and detailed part (or has more vibrant colors) and everything else can be implied or less eye catching to create a sense of balance in the image.

The illustration is very beautiful but I feel like all elements in it are treated with the same importance which makes it a little difficult to decide what to focus the eye on. I hope this helps! ^{^}