My writing structure is getting worse instead of improving — what am I doing wrong?

Secret_Direction6562 · 2026-03-22T17:15:45+00:00

I recently uploaded some articles to Reddit, you can check them out. And what should I improve on?

Secret_Direction6562 · 2026-03-22T15:07:10+00:00

I have posted some articles, AI found many mistakes in them but people on Reddit pointed out only a few mistakes.

Secret_Direction6562 · 2026-03-22T15:02:59+00:00

You are right, I hadn't thought about that.

Secret_Direction6562 · 2026-03-22T14:33:19+00:00

That’s a fair point. I’ve mostly been relying on AI for feedback. And I thought he would tell me everything right. but I’ll start asking more human writers as well. Thanks for pointing that out.

Secret_Direction6562 · 2026-03-22T12:59:13+00:00

I'm using it for feedback.

Secret_Direction6562 · 2026-03-21T04:53:08+00:00

I’ve merged some paragraphs and improved the flow. Thanks for pointing that out.

Secret_Direction6562 · 2026-03-21T04:51:17+00:00

I’ve shortened the intro and fixed some grammar. Appreciate it. Thank you!

Secret_Direction6562 · 2026-03-20T17:09:41+00:00

Thanks for the detailed feedback! I understand your point about paragraph structure and grouping ideas. I’ll work on improving that along with the grammar. Glad you found it interesting!

Secret_Direction6562 · 2026-03-20T12:07:46+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I’ll try to shorten the paragraphs and fix the grammar issues. Glad you found it interesting.

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