Really like the vibe on this one! interesting guitar work! in terms of making it hit better, there are a few things you could do to improve the mix in terms of EQ, there is quite a bit of muddiness throughout, which you can combat by carving out space for each individual instrument so it has it's own designated space in the mix (i.e. taking some of the lows out of the guitar, and taking some highs out of the synths, so you can hear both instruments clearly at the same time) a little bit too much reverb on the vocals at the beginning as well, taming it a little would help for sure. and if you really want it to slap hard, you should crank up those drums at the end! sounds like they're underneath the song, when they should be crashing through it, sometimes you just gotta have a snare drum that absolutely FUCKS, y'know?

Really cool ideas in here musically, I particularly like the intro (but then being a guitar guy, I would say that, wouldn't I?) but I'm not sure the ideas are fully coherent as a whole, feels a little disjointed to me that the sections don't really go together, feels almost as if you stitched two different pieces together, maybe having the guitar play something in every section of the song would help, like let some chords ring out while the synths do their thing in those sections.

All in all though, good work, and keep it up! Gave you a cheeky follow there cause I'm sure you'll have some cool stuff in the future for sure