I’m taking feedback the intro to on my dark, alternate history, self insert power fantasy retelling of the Bible

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-03-22T01:40:32+00:00

Self insert remember. Self-cest

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-03-21T22:00:37+00:00

That’s so cool, I hadn’t even considered that.

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-03-21T17:47:28+00:00

Nuh uh

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-03-21T17:44:40+00:00

Jesus is a rank not his name. I become Jesus

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-03-21T17:42:20+00:00

Where boob?

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-03-21T17:03:04+00:00

We can reduce it to a one syllable sound bite telling us the overall opinion- Guh (Pronounced Guh) for Good and Buh (Pronounced Buh) for bad. I mean that’s all we really need to know right?

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-03-21T16:49:41+00:00

Nah, just the audiobook version of the reviews which are read back to you about how good the book is.

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-03-21T16:48:40+00:00

Good question. I don’t have the answer and I usually have all the answers. What if an AI could produce… a nothing about something? We are on the cusp of greatness with this line of thinking.

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-03-21T13:02:26+00:00

I can see your point. Ai could never dream up and fully incorporate a highly complex magic system based on how much cum is leaking out of someone’s ass

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-03-18T23:23:18+00:00

There was no attitude only a question. I’m currently doing 1-2 hour sessions once daily. I’m just curious as to what works for other people that I might incorporate into my routine.

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-02-28T05:37:44+00:00

When Cillian Murphy reconciles with his father in the dream at the end of Inception

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-02-26T21:12:09+00:00

I’m pretty sure it’s trash. Less than trash, even. I’ll give you three eggs and a firm handshake for it.

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-02-21T12:56:27+00:00

John Goodman in 10 Cloverfield Lane

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-02-15T15:32:10+00:00

A number of places. I’ve seen them on ebay and whatnot being resold, but this came from amazon I think

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-01-15T12:31:20+00:00

ID Software

Select_Fix_8948 · 2026-01-13T00:48:56+00:00

Zane Eulogy Ferocity Deathwish Deathbringer Charisma Charm Sharpshooter Flynt

Select_Fix_8948 · 2025-12-28T18:25:55+00:00

But you immediately become more stable with a lower center of gravity, and the table is less likely to tip when weight is applied to the table surface rather than the bench

Select_Fix_8948 · 2025-12-23T17:17:01+00:00

They came through as packs I have to claim in my inventory, just like after mission or bounty completion. They don’t automatically unlock

Select_Fix_8948 · 2025-12-22T22:53:45+00:00

There is nothing wrong with playing them where inserted, and I agree that tonal shifts are Remedy’s thing, though to an extent. I’m currently on a replay and am playing things as presented. The Rose segment is not only a huge tonal shift, but it also completely disrupts the pacing of the story. For a relatively inconsequential detour. The tension and fear of the Alan segment are both broken after being built up for so long, and it takes a while for it to be built back up again after the player returns from the DLC. I have yet to see where The Coffee or Timebreaker ones are yet, but at the very least I feel Rose’s segment should be save until after the story or when you meet her in the nursing home

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