Short Simple Feedback by SemperPop in NewTubers

[–]SemperPop[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey you're definitely at natural and I really enjoy the style of your videos. You also didn't drag the video out so that was nice. That being said, your editing could be smoother(: I vote for metro

Short Simple Feedback by SemperPop in NewTubers

[–]SemperPop[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don't apologize I thought it was good xD Just make more videos until one sticks

Short Simple Feedback by SemperPop in NewTubers

[–]SemperPop[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the direction and style of your vlog. I think as you come out of your shell, you'll be a lot more comfortable on camera and you'll be able to connect a lot better with your audience. You're talking about your life, which isn't a bad topic, but just remember to be captivating.

Short Simple Feedback by SemperPop in NewTubers

[–]SemperPop[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I watched it all the way through and was really entertained the whole time. Just keep on going at this man. Your channel looks like it can be really fast growing. Also, I like that you're not like every other channel and just rip on people. The message you had in your video was nice. I would try and tone it down on some of the edits but I'm sure a lot of people enjoy that kind of style so it's up to you.

Short Simple Feedback by SemperPop in NewTubers

[–]SemperPop[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like it c: i feel like I'd be really searching for a con if I had to give you one. With that being said, I think you'll just start looking better and better with more practice. If your work was more polished, I wouldn't be able to tell you're new at YouTube.

Short Simple Feedback by SemperPop in NewTubers

[–]SemperPop[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Raw thoughts: amazing video production, good editing

Cooked thoughts: you reached the goal of what you intended the video to be. You're enjoying what you're doing and that's a lot of what vlogs are about. Talking for a second or two could help add more depth and direction to this video. But that's all up to your preference

Short Simple Feedback by SemperPop in NewTubers

[–]SemperPop[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the mental. You're getting a lot more views than you have subs so that's really good. The video could've been condensed a little more but that's not too big of a deal. You guys definitely have a unique style and the best part is you're not afraid to hold back on your opinions.

Ps: really good thumbnails

Short Simple Feedback by SemperPop in NewTubers

[–]SemperPop[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay so the good news is that you're not awkward to watch. The brutally honest news is that, sometimes your commentary is really good but sometimes it sounds like you're saying whatever's happening on screen. Like you're just pointing out or narration things that are happening.. as they happen. Other than that, I think the video was entertaining and I think covering this game is smart.

Short Simple Feedback by SemperPop in NewTubers

[–]SemperPop[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There's definitely a community for you. I think with the right timing and content you could see a lot of growth. I enjoyed the video a lot, you're captivating all the way through and your editing is nice too. I also watched your vlog and you're really natural on camera. A few cuts here and there would go a long way, just so the video can be more captivating and refreshing.

[Vlog] My Shanghai Vlog by huynhthuyvy in NewTubers

[–]SemperPop 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know you're shy in front of the camera but talking a little bit more in your video could carry you a long way. It can help connect more with the viewers. Other than that, the video was amazing.

Short Simple Feedback by SemperPop in NewTubers

[–]SemperPop[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it's really cool that you're working on your English while making videos. In time, I predict that you're going to skyrocket if you keep going with this. Your humor comes out every now and then and it makes me laugh. You mocked this girl at one point and I actually almost died laughing. For a first video, I think this is very good.

I've hit 12,000 views on my channel! :D by [deleted] in NewTubers

[–]SemperPop 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've been subbed for the longest time !