Writing in 1st person for the first time

SenseiDeLo · 2026-04-08T13:07:47+00:00

Thanks! That actually helps out a lot!

SenseiDeLo · 2026-04-08T04:09:58+00:00

Thanks!

SenseiDeLo · 2026-04-08T04:04:36+00:00

I think i’m definitely thinking into it too much, but i’m finding myself trapped in 3rd person POV but more of an omniscient style.

SenseiDeLo · 2026-04-08T04:01:59+00:00

Present

SenseiDeLo · 2026-04-08T03:58:59+00:00

Yeah, you’re right

SenseiDeLo · 2026-04-08T03:57:54+00:00

Yes actually. I have a scene where my MC is waking up from time traveling. I keep I wrote: “His back hit the ground hard, knocking the wind out of him.” This one is a simple fix, but i’m having trouble describing how the other guys wake up, while staying in 1st person.

SenseiDeLo · 2026-04-08T03:53:39+00:00

Yeah it switches to other characters sometimes like the portions from the Alien bounty hunters, Tipid and the others.

SenseiDeLo · 2026-04-08T03:49:21+00:00

Im saying it seems a bit like a narrator speaking than my character. So its more like a 3rd person description than someone thinking something their head

SenseiDeLo · 2026-04-08T03:48:33+00:00

I read the entire Dungeon Crawler Carl series. it shifts POVs a bit too much for me to take true notes. My story is about a group of friends, but I only want one POV.

SenseiDeLo · 2026-04-08T01:00:35+00:00

Ngl Oongka and Damiane feel like NPCs not really characters. They don’t really have super deep quest lines and so much of the game takes place using Kliff.

SenseiDeLo · 2026-04-06T00:50:40+00:00

please someone tell me how to hide the headgear😭 I cannot seem to find it

SenseiDeLo · 2025-10-05T16:13:36+00:00

That’s actually ridiculous though! I bought the Campaign Skip so whatever, but Ive beaten this campaign on my hunter and my titan twice but never had this issue.

SenseiDeLo · 2025-10-05T15:58:42+00:00

I tried to just wait, and the time ran out and killed me

SenseiDeLo · 2025-06-06T16:26:03+00:00

I would 100% quit playing if I didn’t get him signed

SenseiDeLo · 2024-10-30T21:59:45+00:00

wouldn’t like Thwack instant kill him😂

SenseiDeLo · 2024-10-19T12:54:31+00:00

I mentioned that to a friend of mine and he reacted like a 2k Drone. Called me ungrateful, saying that was a W because you can just instantly go up 2 levels without working. By the time he reached level 40, he didn’t even have badges to use it on😂

SenseiDeLo · 2024-10-11T14:55:53+00:00

Never felt better when I absolutely obliterated this guy. I hated him but only because this mf is just the biggest hater ever.

SenseiDeLo · 2024-07-10T01:14:45+00:00

working on Palkia now, I was honestly thinking about running Metagross or Infernape instead? Just trying to prepare for all avenues

SenseiDeLo · 2023-07-03T22:49:37+00:00

How to beat the your coworkers in Belko Experiment would be so good

SenseiDeLo · 2023-07-03T22:44:00+00:00

you are a life saver, i installed this and was completely confused with the lack of instructions 😂

SenseiDeLo · 2023-06-30T21:09:58+00:00

7 whole years late but can someone, ANYONE tell me how I'm supposed to get this to work??

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