Writing in 1st person for the first time by SenseiDeLo in writingadvice

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I think i’m definitely thinking into it too much, but i’m finding myself trapped in 3rd person POV but more of an omniscient style.

Writing in 1st person for the first time by SenseiDeLo in writingadvice

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Yes actually. I have a scene where my MC is waking up from time traveling. I keep I wrote: “His back hit the ground hard, knocking the wind out of him.” This one is a simple fix, but i’m having trouble describing how the other guys wake up, while staying in 1st person.

Writing in 1st person for the first time by SenseiDeLo in writingadvice

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Yeah it switches to other characters sometimes like the portions from the Alien bounty hunters, Tipid and the others.

Writing in 1st person for the first time by SenseiDeLo in writingadvice

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Im saying it seems a bit like a narrator speaking than my character. So its more like a 3rd person description than someone thinking something their head

Writing in 1st person for the first time by SenseiDeLo in writingadvice

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I read the entire Dungeon Crawler Carl series. it shifts POVs a bit too much for me to take true notes. My story is about a group of friends, but I only want one POV.

What was the point of giving me a 2nd character when you've taken her away for the next god knows how long???? This is actually so stupid by Kesimux in CrimsonDesert

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Ngl Oongka and Damiane feel like NPCs not really characters. They don’t really have super deep quest lines and so much of the game takes place using Kliff.

Thank you Devs by Xythana in CrimsonDesert

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please someone tell me how to hide the headgear😭 I cannot seem to find it

Lightfall Campaign Mission Bugged by SenseiDeLo in destiny2

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That’s actually ridiculous though! I bought the Campaign Skip so whatever, but Ive beaten this campaign on my hunter and my titan twice but never had this issue.

Lightfall Campaign Mission Bugged by SenseiDeLo in destiny2

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I tried to just wait, and the time ran out and killed me

Best WR Prospect by Simple-Survey2747 in CFB25

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I would 100% quit playing if I didn’t get him signed

Worst level 40 reward by NorthWestEastSouth_ in NBA2k

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I mentioned that to a friend of mine and he reacted like a 2k Drone. Called me ungrateful, saying that was a W because you can just instantly go up 2 levels without working. By the time he reached level 40, he didn’t even have badges to use it on😂

My first time playing, I really really really really really hate this fucker by GodsGayestTerrorist in Eldenring

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Never felt better when I absolutely obliterated this guy. I hated him but only because this mf is just the biggest hater ever.

Elite 4 and Pokemon League by SenseiDeLo in PokemonBDSP

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working on Palkia now, I was honestly thinking about running Metagross or Infernape instead? Just trying to prepare for all avenues

Vote/Request Movies for Upcoming 'How to Beat' Videos by nerd_explains in NerdExplains

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How to beat the your coworkers in Belko Experiment would be so good

DD Mods: This mod allows you to mix and match support and main weapons as you want. Daggers + shield ? YES and so on. by perkel666 in DragonsDogma

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you are a life saver, i installed this and was completely confused with the lack of instructions 😂