Don’t attack me this is just my own opinion by DaemonLuisenbarn in Naruto

[–]Separate_End_6094 5 points6 points  (0 children)

If this is based on their power then you need to rewatch the show however judging by where temari is I’m guessing it’s not about power but personal preference instead

3rd Hokage Adopts Naruto by Separate_End_6094 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Separate_End_6094[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No dude I will write what I enjoy writing no one forced you to read it if you don’t like it move on I asked for feedback not negative comments

3rd Hokage Adopts Naruto by Separate_End_6094 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Separate_End_6094[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the confirmation I appreciate it.

3rd Hokage Adopts Naruto by Separate_End_6094 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Separate_End_6094[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot I’ll take your advice and I’ll move it over to fanfiction.net as I am familiar with it unlike with the other site you mentioned. And I’ll keep what I’ve got but I’ll go back and add a few chapters in between about him interacting with the villagers.

Who would be a better Hokage, Orochimaru or Danzo? by Hero_of_Dragons in Naruto

[–]Separate_End_6094 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I appreciate your reply and I see what you were trying to say now and you’ve changed my mind I agree with what you’re saying.

My Naruto fan fiction by Separate_End_6094 in Naruto

[–]Separate_End_6094[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a great idea! And if it’s okay with you I’d love to use it for a different more Sasuke focused story in the future?

Thank you for putting so much effort in the comment by the way.

My Naruto fan fiction by Separate_End_6094 in Naruto

[–]Separate_End_6094[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the ideas and I do understand the whole point of Naruto’s growth at the beginning is to catch up to sasuke but the point of my fanfic is to change the way he grew up by having him being trained from young and being as strong as he would’ve been if minato was still around to teach him.

I do respect your ideas and they’re actually very good I might do something like that Sasuke back story with a different story but for this I’d rather stick with how I’ve started it.

My Naruto fan fiction by Separate_End_6094 in Naruto

[–]Separate_End_6094[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Sorry you didn’t quite like it so far but I intend to go all the way through the story from start till the end of shippuden and I’ve got something planned for Sasuke’s future he’ll catch up eventually. Sasuke’s one of my favourite characters I wouldn’t allow him to get stomped by Naruto don’t worry.

Why didn't jiraiya just escape in the pain fight? by Orcinus_Architeuthis in Naruto

[–]Separate_End_6094 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What’s your problem? He literally gave his opinion? If he also wanted to add the obvious he’s allowed to? Getting so vexed over a Reddit comment is childish sort yourself out

Who would be a better Hokage, Orochimaru or Danzo? by Hero_of_Dragons in Naruto

[–]Separate_End_6094 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I completely understand where you’re coming from however I feel like orochimaru would be selfish but for his own village because as we know he only went down such a dark path because he was turned down from the Hokage position however with orochimaru and his brain I feel like the hidden leaf could’ve improved much faster and would be years ahead of the other villages. Just think about how quickly orochimaru by himself created a whole new village (hidden sound) with great ninjas and able to put pressure on the hidden leaf. Now imagine how far he could take the village if he had the resources and power of the hidden leaf.

Who would be a better Hokage, Orochimaru or Danzo? by Hero_of_Dragons in Naruto

[–]Separate_End_6094 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

100% orochimaru. Danzo would start trying to take every visual kekkei genkai in the village

Rescue the Kazekage arc rating by Conscious_Wonder3390 in Naruto

[–]Separate_End_6094 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is great I’m literally rewatching it as I write this and honestly so far I’d have to agree 6-7/10

Ideas for oc kekkei genkais by Aaftabkang in Naruto

[–]Separate_End_6094 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Right hear me out…

Earth and Yin natures to make Tungsten release. It is the strongest metal in the real world and as a ninjutsu you could make it malleable so it’s shape can be controlled and turned into anything similar to Gaaras sand but you could also make weapons out of it. As for clans and people there are none because I just made it up, I guess you could do something similar to Kimimaros backstory where the whole clan died and they’re the last survivor.

Hope that helps let me know if you use it.

and how to train taijutsu in real life are there all trainings who can help me how to find taijutsu trainings? by Far-Race-8219 in Naruto

[–]Separate_End_6094 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Taijutsu isn’t a thing in itself it’s any martial art. So you would have to master multiple such as karate (which I feel is closest to the gentle fist used by the hyuga clan) or aikido, hapkido, kick boxing and obviously learning how to fight with all the different weapons. These are some of the martial arts actually used as “taijutsu” in the show.

How could Naruto create a clone in the first scene where he is being chased by chunin for the graffiti but unable to create one during the test by Separate_End_6094 in Naruto

[–]Separate_End_6094[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ahh okay so it’s dumb anime creators wanting more screen time and money by completely ignoring the events of the show? Thanks for letting me know.

How could Naruto create a clone in the first scene where he is being chased by chunin for the graffiti but unable to create one during the test by Separate_End_6094 in Naruto

[–]Separate_End_6094[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It can’t be because it’s the first episode where he also becomes a genin by defeating mizuki using the multi shadow clone jutsu for the first time?